Comments | peterandclaude: Fic: Echo a New Song

lotus0kid in peterandclaude

Fic: Echo a New Song

Aug 29, 2010 20:28

Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,981
Disclaimer: Heroes characters belong to Tim Kring.
A/N: For the Plaude Bingo prompt "unexpected date."
Summary: Peter and Claude pull surveillance duty for the new Company.

( This is nice. )

challenge, fic

Comments 10

visiblemarket August 30 2010, 01:31:40 UTC

AWWW. &hearts The food stealing! The Claude blushing! The rain and the kissing! This was fantastic and a great new addition to schmoop bingo fics.

lotus0kid August 30 2010, 16:28:16 UTC

XD Thank you! Happy to know my schmoop is up to snuff.

gingerberrysnap August 30 2010, 02:31:04 UTC

Aw, this was lovely! Very sweet. :) I especially loved all of Claude's moments of gentle snarking mixed in with flirting.

Their first kiss is extremely romantic. I think they can leave their target for a bit to head back to Peter's hotel room and nobody would be concerned.

lotus0kid August 30 2010, 16:30:26 UTC

Thanks very much! Ye-eah, Claude had a hard time remembering how to strike that balance between flirting and snarking, but I think he got there in the end.

Heh, I concur. Jon would be just fine without his surveillance detail for a while.

starrdust411 August 30 2010, 04:42:41 UTC

Awww! This was so cute. Especially the last line :D

lotus0kid August 30 2010, 16:30:55 UTC

Thanks kindly! I always struggle with endings, so I'm glad it worked for you.

lelann137 August 30 2010, 20:58:20 UTC

ooohh. this was adorable. thanks for sharing

lotus0kid August 31 2010, 00:06:10 UTC

Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed it.

c_quinn September 4 2010, 19:03:52 UTC

This is just wonderful. I'm sorry it took me so long to read it but I'm glad I finally got the chance because I was grinning the whole way through. Sweet in all the best ways. :)

lotus0kid September 5 2010, 02:03:04 UTC

Heh, no problem, I'm very glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!