I'm guessing that this is a world where Arthur's master plan (whatever it was) was put into action and suceed years before the events of the show... yes?
I'm definitely intrigued. Can't wait to see where this goes from here.
I'm guessing that this is a world where Arthur's master plan (whatever it was) was put into action and suceed years before the events of the show... yes?
A bit, yes. The plan isn't quite the same but the general goal of world domination has been achieved. ;)
I like this. It's interesting. Peter is so cute at this age. I love him with his teddy bear. How will Claude fit in though? Is he going to be young too?
How will Claude fit in though? Is he going to be young too?
Hah. No. I'm afraid I couldn't manage a kid!fic without it seeming creepy. The next chapters will take place at a later time, removing the potential oddity.
I've already read this prologue, and you already know how much I love it. :) Definitely a very intriguing start.
Little Peter is exceptionally sweet, and it's interesting to think of him growing up and wanting to be a villain. Because of course he wants to make his father proud. But then when he realizes what being a villain actually entails... I hate seeing his poor little heart broken.
Seriously though, this is so painfully adorable: He then wobbles up, reaches for his favorite bear (because he does have a favorite, even as he'll never admit it. He doesn't want to hurt the others, brand them inferior).
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I'm guessing that this is a world where Arthur's master plan (whatever it was) was put into action and suceed years before the events of the show... yes?
I'm definitely intrigued. Can't wait to see where this goes from here.
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That always seems to be the case. [laugh]
I'm guessing that this is a world where Arthur's master plan (whatever it was) was put into action and suceed years before the events of the show... yes?
A bit, yes. The plan isn't quite the same but the general goal of world domination has been achieved. ;)
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More, please!
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Hah. No. I'm afraid I couldn't manage a kid!fic without it seeming creepy. The next chapters will take place at a later time, removing the potential oddity.
Thanks!
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Oh okay. :) I was thinking you were going to make Claude Peter's age. LOL.
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Heh. While that would be interesting, I don't believe it's the right story for me. It might veer too much into the crack-arena.
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Little Peter is exceptionally sweet, and it's interesting to think of him growing up and wanting to be a villain. Because of course he wants to make his father proud. But then when he realizes what being a villain actually entails... I hate seeing his poor little heart broken.
Seriously though, this is so painfully adorable: He then wobbles up, reaches for his favorite bear (because he does have a favorite, even as he'll never admit it. He doesn't want to hurt the others, brand them inferior).
I'm so happy you're still posting this!
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Well I like to hear it. Because I'm needy.
But then when he realizes what being a villain actually entails...
He had the meanings twisted, poor thing. He thought villains were like Superman (or the Care Bears. Because you know he's all about the Care Bears).
I'm so happy you're still posting this!
If I can't use it for the Big Boom, I'm at least going to try to use it here. [laugh]
Thank you!
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Nay stays helpfully quiet.
I <3 Nay! He is the best bear ever.
This is ... disturbing. But you knew that. It also feels huge! How much do you have? Definitely looking forward to more :)
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Peter loves his Nay. ;)
This is ... disturbing. But you knew that.
It was originally meant to be cracky but... That didn't work out.
How much do you have?
The next two chapters are written and the third is outlined. I just haven't had much time for it.
Thanks!
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