Dreaming in the Waking World

Aug 06, 2011 16:05

Title: Dreaming in the Waking World
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Pansy/Luna
Rating: G
Word Count: 305
Summary: In her dreams, Pansy doesn’t steal Luna’s things; she hides them.
Author's Notes: Written for the Summer 2011 Wishlist Event at rarepair_shorts. Prompts used: Pansy steals Luna's things; hide and seek; trail of bread crumbs; holding breath.

Dreaming in the Waking World )

femmeslash, ship: pansy/luna, fandom: harry potter, genre: fantasy, community: rarepair_shorts, character: luna lovegood, rating: g, character: pansy parkinson, gift, *fic

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hogwartsvixxxen August 6 2011, 23:34:27 UTC
YAY Femslash Pansy/Luna

The forest leaves are slick with rain and moonlight, and they cling to her robes as she skirts through the brush silently

Someday, in either world, Pansy will secret herself away, and leave a trail of breadcrumbs leading to her open heart. For now, though, she simply watches through the trees, preparing for the day she will let herself be found.
I hope someday comes soon I really liked this.

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peskywhistpaw August 6 2011, 23:38:10 UTC
:DDD

I'm glad you enjoyed it! This is probably my favorite femmeslash ship.

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hogwartsvixxxen August 6 2011, 23:50:42 UTC
This is my first Pansy/Luna and Yes I enjoyed it. I wrote a Pansy/Ginny I like Pansy femslash fics.

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sortabutnot August 7 2011, 00:05:41 UTC
Wow, thanks so much! I really love the imagery and atmosphere in this, love what you did with the prompts! :) My favourite line is the one about the moon piled on top of itself, it's absolutely beautiful. The whole thing is so rich in imagery and emotion; I can definitely feel and smell the soil of the forest floor and see moonlight bathing everything in your words. It's a lovely interpretation of the ship, too, and I like the dream/awakeness warp on reality. Couldn't be happier with it, and really appreciate you writing something for me!

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peskywhistpaw August 7 2011, 00:07:36 UTC
Oh, I'm so glad you like it! ♥ When I saw that someone had requested this ship, I couldn't help myself.

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lash_larue August 7 2011, 00:33:23 UTC
This is so pretty!

Marvelous imagery, I can clearly see them both, Luna happily following the trail, and Pansy longing for the courage to be found.

So much in so few words,
L

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ryuuvictoire August 7 2011, 00:36:13 UTC
Agree with this comment 1000%.

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peskywhistpaw August 7 2011, 00:59:03 UTC
<333333

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peskywhistpaw August 7 2011, 00:58:54 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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zofbadfaith August 7 2011, 01:21:35 UTC
This is so sweet and so pretty.
I love how everything is in shades of blue, makes me think that it's because Luna's eyes are blue :)
And it makes me feel like asking if maybe one of these days you'd consider writing a continuation to this? ;)

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peskywhistpaw August 7 2011, 01:22:58 UTC
Hee, I'm glad you like it!

While I may not do a direct continuation, I am generally sucked back into writing Pansy/Luna at some time or other, so perhaps. XD

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bluemermaid August 7 2011, 05:45:28 UTC
Oh, I love this! The imagery is so beautiful, and I love the idea of Pansy hiding Luna's things because she's hiding her heart. It's really well done. :)

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peskywhistpaw August 7 2011, 15:10:10 UTC
Thank you so much!

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