Might I But Moor

[peskywhistpaw]

Title: Might I But Moor
Fandom: Twilight
Pairings: Jacob/Bella with Leah/Embry on the side
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,140
Summary: Everyone is moving on-has moved on; everyone is in the present, in the future, and what is past has passed. But Bella Swan is moored in a day ago, a week ago, months and months and years ago, in everything that

Comments

[anonymous]

AWW I LOVED THIS!! leah/embry<3 jake/bella <<<3333 i especially loved the part at the end with jake sleeping on the couch. I awwed out loud haha. GREAT JOB!

[peskywhistpaw]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

[peskywhistpaw]

(Haha, don't worry about it. I'm usually so behind on these things, I almost always wait till the last minute. I was just itching to write this, though!)

No worries about that, either! XD

I'm glad you liked that part! I hadn't thought about putting it in, originally, but I just couldn't resist. I've always hated how Bella turns out to be so dependent on either Edward or Jacob, when in the very beginning she struck me as being a very independent girl. Grr! LOL, though, no worries! I used to have the part about Bella having wild nights of her own worded differently, and I was like waiiiit, waittt, Bella, what exactly are you doing on these wild nights?

Hee. Anyway, you're very welcome! I enjoyed writing this! :D

[kailorien]

This was an enriching and deep perspective into both the characters or Bella and Leah. I'm personally thrilled that you had Leah in it, she is made of awesome and Smeyer should have given her a book all of her own. :)
Embry the next Jake?
Im sorry, but since joining sortofbeautiful I find Im falling for the whole freakin pack lol!
I loved the whole 'Sex Poem' moment, made me lol.
Beautiful work darl. xx

[peskywhistpaw]

Thanks! I was so excited that my prompt had Leah in it - I love writing her so much more than Bella now, it was hard not to make the entire fic about her! XD

Guhhh. I love the whole pack, too! I just read stretch's ficathon entry, and guh! GUHHH! ♥

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it! I had fun with the Sex Poem part. XD Hee.

[kailorien]

isn't it funny how one of the least 'important' or should I say, minor characters, of the saga seems to have more personality than one of the main characters?
We need a Leah/Embry community me thinks :)
I really wish I was able to get blackpack off the ground and running, but Im so new to running communities! lol
Egh.
Im going to be away from the comupter for 2 whole days. That means no LJ. No fics. God. I need a life. lol

[peskywhistpaw]

Oh, I know, right? Leah is so amazing and full of depth that I can hardly STAND IT! LOL.

YES. YES. I've read the pairing a couple times before, and it just works.

It's so hard to get communities up and running, though, and to keep them that way. I've made a few before, and they are ghost towns.

*gasp* Nooo! Hee. You should print some out and take them with you. XD

[fifthofdecember]

AHHH. this was so, so good. i love that you managed to make this about two pairings, and balanced it perfectly.

i love it! :]

[peskywhistpaw]

Thank you! :D

[majestamoniet]

Aww. Absolutely love it!

Bella + Independence = Goodness

I especially loved the part where you just used dialogue and still managed to perfectly capture Bella and Jacob's characters.

[peskywhistpaw]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had fun with the all-dialogue bit. XD