Comments | persnickett: Guess who's back, Dom!

persnickett

Guess who's back, Dom!

Jun 02, 2010 19:29

Hoo, boy.

Well I'm back after a long silence. Lots of changes to report. New Fandom. First Slash. Never thought any of this would happen to me, but I guess I shouldn't be stunned because, quelle surprise, it has hot boys in even hotter cars. I guess I'll let the story do the rest of the talking for me.

If you're back here after my long silence, ( Read more... )

brian/dom, brian o'conner, the fast and the furious, fast and furious, fic, tfatf, dom toretto, omgslash

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daria234 June 3 2010, 00:35:16 UTC

This was awesome!! First slash? Srsly? Terrific fic!

I love the way Dom slowly realizes how much he cares, and the seamless way the sexiness and the real emotion blend together. I thought the discussion of Letty was really well done and handled in a way that respected both the old relationship and the new one.

And Dom's meditation on Brian's legs :)

Great fic!!

persnickett June 3 2010, 00:41:14 UTC

Wow. Thanks for the generous comment...I'm humbled, you touched on so many aspects.

Glad you liked Brian's legs lol. Usually it's the hair, or those eyes that get all the attention! Thank you.

eotu June 3 2010, 03:11:01 UTC

Kinda speechless here. Very hot, with the tongues and the legs and the eyes. Wonderful Dom POV, and how he falls for Brian because Brian gives him the space to mourn. That especially. I really like that you acknowledge Dom's love for Letty, and what it cost him to lose her. I wouldn't have believed it was your first slash if you hadn't said so. Well done!

persnickett June 3 2010, 13:26:39 UTC

Thank you for commenting, it's sure nice to have made you speechless. We we all miss Letty! I'm glad my first slash was a sucessful one. :)

goddesstar June 3 2010, 05:48:56 UTC

You did a really good job in the characterization of Dom. I loved his internal monologue, especially where he tries to find the differences and similarities between Brian and Letty. Very well done! I hope to see more in this fandom from you!

~g

persnickett June 3 2010, 13:55:29 UTC

Ooh thanks for that (& for the friend) I'll take it as a compliment. You likely will see more, if the bunnies breeding all over my hard drive are any indication. Darn these boys!

goddesstar June 4 2010, 04:25:57 UTC

That's great news! I am looking forward to it:)

jillybean_6939 June 3 2010, 06:41:28 UTC

That was really awesome! I loved the way Dom tries to resist :P

Thank you for sharing this!

persnickett June 3 2010, 13:57:49 UTC

Aw thanks! No one can resist Brian forever...

lousy_science June 4 2010, 00:15:02 UTC

Fantastic. Mind - > blown.

persnickett June 4 2010, 00:30:27 UTC

!! Now THAT's feedback! When I'm done blushing I'll pick up the pieces for ya.