A John McClane Christmas - part 2 (complete)

Jan 02, 2011 08:36

A John McClane Christmas - part 2

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gloriana January 2 2011, 17:56:52 UTC
A quick comment, but I just wanted to say that I loved the writing on this story. Your John-voice and your Matt-voice are just perfect throughout, I loved the flashbacks (they were *so* in character! Just the sort of telephone conversations John would have!), and I loved Matt scheming throughout. Lucy and Matt's banter was great, and the emotions were intense, and yet not too soppy, as some Christmas stories can be. You've done a seriously wonderful job with this - thanks for crossposting it.

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persnickett January 3 2011, 15:00:43 UTC
Well thank you so much for the comment, I always appreciate them so. And I'm pleased flashbacks worked becuase certain devices can always feel a bit dodgy and overplayed when you're peicing things together! And not soppy but intense? Yes I think that makes me happiest of all.

Thanks. :D

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yippiekiyaymf January 2 2011, 21:02:08 UTC
I love it, from the Seussical bookends to the snarky yet loving banter, it's like a big cup of Christmas cocoa with a shot of cinnamon schnapps in it.

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persnickett January 3 2011, 15:03:06 UTC
Hee, I LOVE the Grinch. Thanks so much for noticing. And ooooh, that image made me feel all warm and happy. I just wanna snuggle into this comment and watch...well I was gonna say It's a Wonderful Life, but let's face it. There's no better Christmas movie than Die Hard. ;)

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green_grrl January 2 2011, 22:31:25 UTC
OMG so happy! I'm so glad John got his reunion with Jack. And Old Man Pulaski is still the most hilarious thing ever!!! Perfect ending to an awesome series. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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persnickett January 3 2011, 15:04:46 UTC
Yay, I'm so happy to spread some cheer (and finally get Jack out of Oz) glad you enjoyed all of this series and especially saw the humour in that nasty old crank. I'm gonna miss these guys...

Thank you.

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severina2001 January 3 2011, 00:35:16 UTC
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!

Okay, I'm going to try real hard here not to just... go over the word limit on comments or something, because OMG. OMG. I was halfway through the first part and realized that I was leaning forward toward the monitor, just totally *drawn in*.

I LOVE. And I have to say, it felt like "Severina's Christmas Present". Like I was just like OMG COULD YOU FIT IN ONE MORE THING I LOVE? I DON'T THINK YOU CAN. *dances*

BLAH BLAH FUCKITY-BLAH. *loves you*

THE SEX AGAINST THE WALL. *loves you even more*

(And oh maaaaaaaaaaaan, that sex is hot. And schmoopy and sexy and yes, romantic. *fans self ( ... )

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persnickett January 3 2011, 15:21:26 UTC
Bluh. (happy bluh) I keep staring at this comment without much idea of how to reply. THANK YOU. Well that works. *dusts hands*

Jus' kiddin'...
YES fuckity-blah was for you. The against-the-wall sex...that was for everyone, hon, you have to SHARE (but yesfineok the leg over the hip was your request, you can have that).

omg JACK!! Who I totally did not see coming.
Really? YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. *Jersey Shore fist pump* Surprise ftw! Jack has been coming since the heart attack, but yeah it seemed like he'd never get here. :D

OMG THE STOCKINGS. *gleeeee*
aw, yay! So glad you liked. Those were in the wrong place, and got moved around a couple times before I realized they were the END, duh Snick. Originally John's last line was it. *shrug* Me and my cut and paste.

I'm revelling in the love, and of course bouncing it right back atcha. Thank you so much. *aggressive hugging ensues*

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lilguppee January 3 2011, 20:41:46 UTC
This was *awesome*!!! Thank you so much for the wonderful stories!

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persnickett January 3 2011, 21:19:00 UTC
*big grin* Thanks so much for being here to read 'em and of course for this comment! :D

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