Heroic Hearts

[persiflage_1]

Title: Heroic Hearts
Author: Persiflage_1
Characters/Pairings: Martha/OMC, Ten, Donna, Jack, Jones family
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: TW S2, DW S4, Peacemaker (James Swallow

Comments

[dirgni19]

GUH. Just. Argh. I couldn't stop myself, I had to read this now (I'm at work) and I'm trying so hard not to cry here at my table. I'm totally gutted! I wasn't expecting the twist at all, and the ending??? Omg. Just amazingly wonderful. Okay, I have to stop gushing, but it's just so beautiful!!!

P.S. I found some typos, will send 'em over in a bit :)

[persiflage_1]

GUH. Just. Argh. I couldn't stop myself, I had to read this now (I'm at work) and I'm trying so hard not to cry here at my table. I'm totally gutted! I wasn't expecting the twist at all, and the ending??? Omg. Just amazingly wonderful. Okay, I have to stop gushing, but it's just so beautiful!!!

Thank you very much - that's exactly the kind of response I was hoping for - to surprise people (and I'm not going to apologise for causing tears since it caused me tears too !)

P.S. I found some typos, will send 'em over in a bit :)

Oh really? Darn ! That's me and padawanpooh fired again then ! :(

[dirgni19]

Here ya go:

“… you will have more a lot more stamina “ <- an extra "more"
“I thought she would generous in bed, she is in everything else.” <- missing “be”

Nah, I was just so into the story that I caught them, otherwise it would've been pretty hard to pick them out!

[persiflage_1]

At least it was only two !

Thanks !

[padawanpooh]

*HEADDESK*

Sorry, Pers!

*looks very very sheepish*

[persiflage_1]

Do you know how many times I read this fic and didn't spot those? Five times - including a final time yesterday before posting, so don't worry about it !

*hugs*

[padawanpooh]

And there's us both with English majors :-P

*hugs right back*

[persiflage_1]

*giggles* But even English Majors are fallible human beings...