Comments | persephone100: Chrysalis Post 2

persephone100

Chrysalis Post 2

Dec 06, 2010 18:00

Comments 8

Inspiring. we should all know that we can make positive changes in our life! calgslinger December 7 2010, 06:12:56 UTC

I like to know how this beauty of butterfly har makes out in his later life. Please give your "muse" a encouraging pat on his lovely round Wraeththu ass and give this story an end.

Sincerely, Cal the G

Re: Inspiring. we should all know that we can make positive changes in our life! persephone100 December 7 2010, 17:14:22 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words! <3 Actually this story was much longer, but the end was too much like someone waved a magic wand and made everything perfect. lol! But I'd love to give it more thought and make a more realistic ending to the tale. And patting my Wraeththu muse on the ass will be fun anyway!! ;D Thanks for reading!

youcantseeus December 9 2010, 02:31:13 UTC

Aww, nice ending. I want to believe that a lot of these first generation hara incepted into violent tribes turned their lives around.

persephone100 December 9 2010, 20:58:38 UTC

Glad you liked the ending! I think there were probably a lot of hara that either were forced into a violent tribe or got tired of being that way and somehow found a way out. I do like to see my hara happy LOL!. Thanks so much for reading and for your comments! :D

aruna_now December 9 2010, 03:15:29 UTC

This was lovely, and Cobweb made me happy with being more than just baggage at the end :)

btw.I is online, waiting for Vel.

PS: How about a fiction with Vel the next time?

persephone100 December 9 2010, 21:01:21 UTC

Aww, I'm happy that you liked the fic and the way I portrayed Cobweb. I know he's one of your faves--mine, too. I'll definitely see you online later and I'd love to write about Vel! <3

Thanks for reading Chrysalis and for your kind comments! :D

snippetygiblets December 9 2010, 16:02:06 UTC

I somehow missed the first part of this story so it was great to read the whole thing in one go. Really enjoyed reading about someone else who escaped the Irraka and liked Ambrosia / Chrysalis as a character. Cal came across really well in this too :0)

persephone100 December 9 2010, 21:06:26 UTC

Thanks so much! I love writing Cal and I'm glad he seemed 'real' to you! And I'm always very happy when someone likes an OC! I hadn't read much fanfic about the Irraka so thought I'd give it a shot. ;D I appreciate your reading my fic and your lovely comments! :D