Fic: Of Serpents and Foxes (Short Fics Challenge)

[gehayi]

Title: Of Serpents and Foxes
Author: gehayi
Characters: Minerva McGonagall, Albus Dumbledore
Rating: G
Word Count: 500
'Summery' it's based on: AU AFTER THIRD TASK FOURTH YEAR! When Albus is roaming the woods, he comes across a gilr who is half fox and half human. He befriends her, and soon her best friend, Mercury,a Naga ,which is a half snake half

Comments

[petcarbocation]

"No, Minerva. I mean 'gilr.'"
"Half fox, half human, and all lizard. "
Lovely!

[a_t_rain]

"I think it's a kind of venomous lizard from the American Southwest."

Heh. Brilliant!

[tree_and_leaf]

Fantastic! Particularly Dumbledore's uncontrollably twinkling eyes, and Minerva's prescence of mind and sarkiness. I love Minerva, and she tends to get forgotten...

[dolorous_ett]

Heeee! Great stuff!

Your combination of whimsical-besotted Dumbledore and rational, sceptical McGonagall were just spot on - the perfect antidote and complement to a very silly "summery"!

[mugglegirl0908]

Absolutely brilliant. Hilarious!

"Let us hope that when Harry finally defeats Voldemort, the Sues will die with their master."

"...We couldn't possibly be so lucky."

Oh, how true that is.

;P