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Gravitation Fic- Constructive Criticism

Sep 30, 2005 00:03

I DON'T KNOW WHY THIS HIT ME TONIGHT IT JUST DID I ONLY HAVE 5,000 WORDS FOR THE CHALLENGE OMG I SUCK.

*cough*

Title: Constructive Criticism
Author: Celeste
Universe: Gravitation
Theme/Topic: N/A
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: YukixShuuichi
Spoilers/Warnings: OOCness, but um, the only spoilers here are for those WHO HAVEN’T SEEN THE SERIES.
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gravitation, yukixshuichi

Comments 10

d_moonchild September 30 2005, 09:50:21 UTC

*giggles* Poor Yuki, giving his characters happy endings without meaning to... Well, there are always sequels to correct the error, ne?

And Tohma's “Um, not unless you wanted that person to die, I suppose” stipulation was excellent. So Tohma :)

Thank you for the story, it was lovely!

peroxidepest17 October 2 2005, 06:34:20 UTC

Glad you liked the story! It was kind of a crazy idea that sorta just popped into my head in the shower so I tend to not think about those at all as I write them. ^^;; But basically, I wanted to write a story where Yuki called Tohma in distress and asked him a stupid question, so it was ALL FOR THAT LINE. ^^;; Such is my planning for a story, eh?

Thanks for the feedback!

aoi_no_tsubasa October 11 2005, 15:31:56 UTC

Being a novelist is such a cool job~
Haha, that's kinda out of point.
But your fic was so cute! I love how Yuki BLAMES Shuichi for the happier endings he's writing.
And it was hilarious how Yuki agreed with Hamada-san's critiques. Lol~ xD

peroxidepest17 October 12 2005, 07:05:58 UTC

Well, when you think about it, Shuuichi probably is to blame for the happy endings. In his own indirect way. YAY. ^^

thosefangs October 11 2005, 23:35:27 UTC

peroxidepest17 October 12 2005, 07:06:19 UTC

He seem to be the denial-y type, doesn't he? ^^;;

rose_mina October 12 2005, 08:23:58 UTC

Can we say, "DENIAL?" I love how you had Yuki think he was all tough, and unchanging, and yet, he is transparent in his happiness exoterically. And then he had to confirm it with Tohma! *snickers* Tohma's response was even better. This is so funny. Please don't hesitate to write more. You sense of humour and style of writing is extremely enjoyable.

peroxidepest17 October 13 2005, 23:13:49 UTC

Definitely denial there... XD it's why I love Yuki so much. There's just something about him that won't give in to the inevitable and i think I'm a sick bastard who likes watching him struggle with that. XD

He's a giant woobie inside, WE ALL KNOW IT. ^^

goldenrat84 August 21 2006, 09:38:05 UTC

I love it! Yuki's totally got his own personal happy ending & it's slowly leaking over into his books. lol