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Supernatural- "The Law of Conservation of Energy" (Ch 12)

Oct 30, 2011 22:57

( Chapter 12 )

supernatural, dean, death, balthazar, castiel, sam, bobby

Comments 8

icetippedwings November 3 2011, 19:56:32 UTC

Omg new!Cas was so wonderfully creepy and upsetting like Godstiel, but different, and poor Bal and Dean having to watch and be so sure he was gone. But once again, as always, Cas is still there somewhere. Loved the depiction of the internet conflict for Cas, between his memories and the new grace and his old grace. And the accidental pickup line was just beautiful.

peroxidepest17 November 3 2011, 21:52:34 UTC

The sad thing is, I worked hours and hours and hours on that pickup line because I had NO IDEA what it would be. It changed so many times. XD

fieryredqueen November 5 2011, 22:30:12 UTC

AwwwwwwwwWWWWWwww. Cas really is a determined mofo. Though, this chapter made me sad because I have kind of been hoping, through all of this, for a sort of accidental Gabriel resurrection, but no. Gabriel was so awesome, but he is all corpsified and gross now...*sniffle* Still, yay for the awesome hugging scene! Is Balthazar just hanging around watching? Heeheehee. Archangel/human love is so much fun to stalk.

peroxidepest17 November 5 2011, 22:42:04 UTC

Balthazar is probably like "OH YAY I CAN HAS PASS OUT NOW?" and passing out. Hopefully Cas will remember to patch him up before he goes to fornicate with Dean. XD

aeryonsun January 13 2012, 22:14:29 UTC

Beautiful beautiful chapter!!! I can't even...oh...wow...yeah!

peroxidepest17 January 14 2012, 04:44:56 UTC

Thank you!

pisceanchic101 November 17 2012, 19:04:23 UTC

Aww. I just love happy endings. :)

tera_gram November 7 2015, 21:01:54 UTC

I am losing my friggin; mind. This is awesome. Your voice and narrative timing is spot on.