Title: A Glass Half Empty
Universe: JE/ NewS (
Gov AU)
Theme/Topic: Uchi fic with Yamanade references
Rating: PG
Character/Pairing/s: NEWS (appearances by Tackey and mentions of Kame)
Warnings/Spoilers: More bad procedural stuffs.
Word Count: 5,115
Summary: Following the events of “
Still Miles to Go”- A glass half empty is also half full.
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It's interesting how you write about Uchi's life now that he is awake. I like your perspective.
I like how you showed NEWS member-ai and Uchi struggling to fit in and now with the natural progression of things, it was better for him to start a new.
The last part where NEWS helps Uchi pack had me in tears. Their acceptance of him leaving them and their well-wishes I feel helped him alot. I think it put his mind at ease that he was not letting both them and himself down.
Your fic puts how I feel about Uchi's situation in JE into a story...everyone who are his fans want him back in NEWS or K8 but with the long passing of time, it is too hard to stick him back into the 2 groups who have grown and bonded. He is good at what he does which is why JE keeps him but he can never go back into those to groups. I think younger fangirls will not be happy as there would be a shift in group dynamics.
I wonder if Uchi himself feels out of place if he were to return to the two groups like how Uchi in your fic feels.By starting over again, Uchi can re-learn things at his own pace and with no pressure from anyone.
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