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XXXHolic- "Such is Fate"

Oct 19, 2009 15:57

Title: Such is Fate
Universe: XXXHolic
Theme/Topic: Timestamp meme request
Rating: G
Character/Pairing/s: lightly DoumekixWatanuki
Warnings/Spoilers: Vague spoilers through ch 182 (Probably AU after the fact)
Word Count: 1,410
Summary: Prequel of sorts to “Never Gone”- You don’t have to know exactly what is missing to know that something is.
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himawari, xxxholic, watanuki, doumeki

Comments 14

anyjen October 19 2009, 23:47:07 UTC

Lovely! A perfect companion piece for the other one, and 100% Doumeki. :3

It’s annoying, they say, when he doesn’t concentrate like that and can still hit the bullseye anyway.

Yes, I can see how that would be annoying. XD

And Doumeki discovers that can’t look away.

“And Doumeki discovers that he can’t look away.”

If it’s like this, Doumeki thinks that won’t mind the wait.

“that he won’t mind the wait.”

peroxidepest17 October 19 2009, 23:53:16 UTC

That was quick.

anyjen October 19 2009, 23:59:42 UTC

I'm not a man, so that's not a problem. ^__-

black_widow1417 October 20 2009, 05:26:51 UTC

*ba dum Tch!*

... sorry I thought that that deserved it. It made me snort. XD

imifumei October 20 2009, 00:09:44 UTC

Oh my goodness, thank you! I love how you write them. I can't even imagine Doumeki going to goukon or karaoke. But the way you describe him longing for something. . .just augh.

This was completely beautiful and heartbreaking (in a good way). I love how Doumeki knows that Watanuki is for him as soon as he sees him.

If I quote bits back to you it will just be quote. . .awwww. . .quote. . .awww. I love the whole thing. I am just so pleased that you wrote this at all, let alone for me. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

This was so wonderful, Pero. I love your guts. Love, love, love, love, love them.

♥♥♥♥♥

peroxidepest17 October 20 2009, 05:16:59 UTC

Yay, so glad you liked it! LOL I had trouble with the start so I was worried it was kind of bland, but if you are happy then all is well in the universe. XD

psych_ten_chan October 20 2009, 04:39:57 UTC

I miss flaily!Watanuki. But smirky!Watanuki isn't bad either. But still, I miss Tsundere!Watanuki. Huhu. Nice fic Pero-sama! ^_^

peroxidepest17 October 20 2009, 05:17:26 UTC

I am sure that Watanuki will return with time.

black_widow1417 October 20 2009, 05:27:25 UTC

I love it when you write this paring. ^______^ so cute..

peroxidepest17 October 20 2009, 05:29:24 UTC

Glad you liked!

black_widow1417 October 23 2009, 06:13:08 UTC

oh ho, btw: http://community.livejournal.com/capslock_bleach/733964.html

XD

peroxidepest17 October 23 2009, 07:07:29 UTC

LOL

beltenebra October 20 2009, 15:48:42 UTC

Not bland at all!!! The style you chose to write this in (it's companion piece as well) perfectly fit the mood of the show... kind of quiet but mesmerizing.

I adored the overall feeling of wistful longing, such a good kind of heartache, able to be dealt with only because you know he is coming back.

Your Doumeki is amazing, patient and wise beyond his years... the whole thing was so, so lovely. Thank you for sharing!!!

♥ ♥ ♥

peroxidepest17 October 22 2009, 01:48:06 UTC

Doumeki is totally my favorite. LOL I Have the soft spot for the quiet badasses I guess. XD