JE/NewS- "Five Times NewS Members Give Each Other Valentines"

Feb 14, 2008 15:55

Title: Five Times NewS Members Give Each Other Valentines
Universe: JE/NewS
Theme/Topic: for the Valentine’s Day 24 Hour Fic Challenge
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing/s: NewS (ALL of NewS)
Warnings/Spoilers: OOC, SCHMOOP, CRAP?
Word Count: 1,844
Summary: NewS on Valentine’s Day.
Dedication: pinkpapyrus and swtjemz for listening to me whine about this for the ( Read more... )

kusano, koyama, je, massu, uchi, yamapi, news, tegoshi, one-ok-rock, shige, moriuchi, ryo

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ryu_no_sora February 15 2008, 00:19:15 UTC
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

UMM YES.

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peroxidepest17 February 15 2008, 00:26:54 UTC
LOL YOU ARE THE FASTEST EVER.

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ryu_no_sora February 15 2008, 00:38:03 UTC
I DON'T WANT TO STUDY FOR MIDTERM MY F-LIST SPARKLES MORE EVERY TIME I REFRESH LOL.

2 was adorable because I'm stupid and thought it was Koyama but then it was Kusano and I was like ♥

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peroxidepest17 February 15 2008, 00:41:00 UTC
HE'S LEGAL FOR THE BOOZE NOW. XD

RANDOMLY, plz tell me you are translating the NewS Message in a Bottle articles next.

I AM DYING TO KNOW.

/subtle. >>

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cynicalism February 15 2008, 00:21:53 UTC
I love them all but 3 is the BEST. EVER. OH MY GOODNESS. Your Shige and Ryo are ever WIN.

2 and 5 are also amazingly special and sweet. ♥

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peroxidepest17 February 15 2008, 00:27:11 UTC
Shige and Ryo are always fun. XD

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strigine February 15 2008, 01:05:09 UTC
3 was my favorite aussi. XDDDDDDDD But they're all awesome.

Only edit I'd suggest is in #3.

he begins, in carefully measured tones, “Thinks that

"thinks" should be lowercase, because it's continuing the earlier sentence.

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peroxidepest17 February 15 2008, 01:15:25 UTC
LOL Clearly brainded from the time crunch. Thx!

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strigine February 15 2008, 01:31:05 UTC
I'm just impressed you got it out! I'd like to write a Valentine's fic for my current obsession, but dunno if I'll have the energy once I get home tonight. @_@

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peroxidepest17 February 15 2008, 01:50:15 UTC
The day is still young. Ganbatte.

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1st_eggokage February 15 2008, 01:09:45 UTC
AAAAAAAAAAA. OH MY GOD THIS WINS TO HIGH HEAVEN.

“THIS IS NOT FROM ME. IT IS FROM MY MOM,” Shige clarifies, with extra emphasis to show he is simply stating a fact and not sulking at all.

Tegoshi giggles and kisses Shige’s cheek. “Jaa, then pass that on to her for me later, ne?”

Shige sputters.

I SQUEALED.

“We can do it like this,” he explains to a mystified Massu as he hands one bun to each the members, “since this is the love of men, ne.”

Massu bites into his nikuman and nods at Yamapi like what the older boy is saying makes absolute, perfect, flawless sense.

Between the two of them, it kind of does.

But Ryo still calls them morons anyway, around a mouthful of meatbun.

IT DOES MAKE SENSE. YAMAPI SHOULD BE A MOTIVATIONAL SPEAKER, SERIOUSLY.

ALSO OMG KOYAMA YOU DARLING. I want to hug him, seriously.

HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY, PERO~ ♥

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peroxidepest17 February 15 2008, 01:15:54 UTC
HAPPY VALENTINE'S!!!

Glad you liked. ^_^

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thawrecka February 15 2008, 01:20:12 UTC
This is so charming and sweet! I think I liked the Shige and Ryo bit the best but Tegoshi and Koyama's traditions, the love of men shared through nikuman, the Uchi and Kusano and Taka-ness - it's all wonderful. Such a lovely fic.

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peroxidepest17 February 15 2008, 02:10:53 UTC
Shige and Ryo make me laugh; they shouldn't be as easy as they are to write harassing one another. XD

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