Title: Five Times NewS Members Give Each Other Valentines
Universe: JE/NewS
Theme/Topic: for the
Valentine’s Day 24 Hour Fic ChallengeRating: PG-13
Character/Pairing/s: NewS (ALL of NewS)
Warnings/Spoilers: OOC, SCHMOOP, CRAP?
Word Count: 1,844
Summary: NewS on Valentine’s Day.
Dedication:
pinkpapyrus and
swtjemz for listening to me whine about this for the
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UMM YES.
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2 was adorable because I'm stupid and thought it was Koyama but then it was Kusano and I was like ♥
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RANDOMLY, plz tell me you are translating the NewS Message in a Bottle articles next.
I AM DYING TO KNOW.
/subtle. >>
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2 and 5 are also amazingly special and sweet. ♥
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Only edit I'd suggest is in #3.
he begins, in carefully measured tones, “Thinks that
"thinks" should be lowercase, because it's continuing the earlier sentence.
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“THIS IS NOT FROM ME. IT IS FROM MY MOM,” Shige clarifies, with extra emphasis to show he is simply stating a fact and not sulking at all.
Tegoshi giggles and kisses Shige’s cheek. “Jaa, then pass that on to her for me later, ne?”
Shige sputters.
I SQUEALED.
“We can do it like this,” he explains to a mystified Massu as he hands one bun to each the members, “since this is the love of men, ne.”
Massu bites into his nikuman and nods at Yamapi like what the older boy is saying makes absolute, perfect, flawless sense.
Between the two of them, it kind of does.
But Ryo still calls them morons anyway, around a mouthful of meatbun.
IT DOES MAKE SENSE. YAMAPI SHOULD BE A MOTIVATIONAL SPEAKER, SERIOUSLY.
ALSO OMG KOYAMA YOU DARLING. I want to hug him, seriously.
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY, PERO~ ♥
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Glad you liked. ^_^
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