Team Players (teaser only)

[permitted_fruit]

They were in the upper bedroom when I found them, in a house where two dozen or so kinky women had gathered for joyful debauchery. Four women clustered around an open door in a hallway seized by an awful quiet. As I approached, one turned with her hand over her mouth and rushed past me down the stairs. I caught the sound of a gasp, then a low, even

Comments

suggestion

[greatgreatminds]

instead of calling her house "the arsenal" it should be called the armory. It would be a little more fitting

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[permitted_fruit]

Hm, yes, that's a slightly better word. But it's already been published. O well!

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[greatgreatminds]

hey, for the record, that wasnt actually my suggestion. though its nice to get a response to feedback. that was my friend's comment. heh.

I was curious, though, if you do reading tours at all.

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[permitted_fruit]

Not yet! :) Maybe if I ever publish longer works. But right now most of my energy is being spent on my day job as a grad student.

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[greatgreatminds]

I was wondering, because my school has an erotica open mic night and I would be beyond honored if it was possible to book you

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[permitted_fruit]

How wonderful! :> I think for now I'm going to keep my professional and erotica-writing personas separate (which means not showing my face under this name in public ;> ). But your offer is very flattering!

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[greatgreatminds]

thats totally cool. give me a heads up if you ever change your mind :)