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Fic: Tread Lightly And Carry A Big Stick

Jul 24, 2007 22:27

Title: Tread Lightly And Carry A Big Stick
Pairing: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay (implied Teyla Emmagen/Ronon Dex)
Spoilers: Up to and including The Tao Of Rodney
Word Count: 2,876
A/N: This all started about a month ago when I channelled Cadman. She's only got one line but damn, it's a good one. Many thanks to my super beta, loupgarou1750.

( Rodney's a brilliant man and he has a brilliant plan. )

fics: stargate atlantis

Comments 103

fiareynne July 24 2007, 12:50:34 UTC

That was amazing. Rodney promising to be good, oh my god. And John finally acquiescing, guh. And bad blowjobs!!!

perfica July 27 2007, 11:30:41 UTC

Rodney means well; I don't know if he'll achieve his goals but John's willing to let some things slide ;-)

_inbetween_ July 24 2007, 12:51:53 UTC

I truly love J's first answer ... and the second ... and the third ...

perfica July 27 2007, 11:31:02 UTC

LOL...thank you.

apple_pi July 24 2007, 13:01:18 UTC

Oh Rodney... *wipes away tears of laughter* Bludgeoning the Colonel into bed is so you.

perfica July 27 2007, 11:31:22 UTC

See, you and I say bludgeoning, Rodney says encouraging :-)

tesserae_ July 24 2007, 13:06:05 UTC

"Homophobe."

"Stalker."

"You're just playing hard to get."

"You're just delusional."

Loved the back-and-forth - Rodney does, indeed, have great technique!

perfica July 27 2007, 11:31:43 UTC

Thank you! I really enjoyed writing the dialogue for this fic.

shadowserenity July 24 2007, 13:08:11 UTC

Much of the dialogue just slays me here. John being the Woman Beast, teaching Rodney his tricks? Oh, gosh. The bad blowjob just tops this piece off. This gets an "awesomesauce" from me :).

perfica July 27 2007, 11:32:38 UTC

Woman Beast ::dies:: He comes off that way to other people, doesn't he? Too bad you and I know he has no idea of what he's doing.

This gets an "awesomesauce" from me

YAY!