seasons in the sun; for hoen

[perfectingart]

Title: seasons in the sun
Rating: NC-17
Side pairing/s: Jongin/Soojung
Length: 4262 words
Summary: We had joy, we had fun, we had seasons in the sun. But the shores that we walked were just seasons out of time.
Warning/s: hints of depression.

Notes: loosely inspired by the movie, Mr Nobody. To my dearest recipient, I hope I did justice to your

Comments

[hoen]

SMHHHHHHHH how did it take me more than a month to give you a proper thanks for this????? ughh im so sorry kowtows forever T__>T

i liked this prompt so much that i was even planning on writing it should my writer choose not to go for it but you did!!! so there's absolutely no reason to now especially because you delivered so well ;;

i love the unorthodox narrative and how you treated perspective basically! i felt so distanced but close to everyone i.e. the good kind of sad?? i'm probably not making sense but all i'm trying to say is you seemed to have put effort into angling how you were going to present the story you had in mind and just props to you for that! i assure you this speaks to me more than i can put into words.. i'm really a sucker for stories like this so ughhhgh thank you!!

p/s if it isn't any bother i was rly wondering what "Blue turns to black. / And black turns to white." means.. and does the end imply that all this was just conjured by jongin's mind? as to why that would be so isn't clear to me ;; for some reason it does make sense? but i can't place my finger on how exactly it does make sense... i understand that you purposely gave it an open ending but i'd really appreciate to hear your thoughts anyhow! ^o^