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kojafras November 15 2016, 02:34:06 UTC
ok listen i'm the ABSOLUTE WORST bc I frickin breezed through this fic bc of how gorgeous and beautiful it is and i NEVER LEFT A COMMENT. ON THIS FIC. BC I AM THE ABSOLUTE WORST.

so this is my 'wow u finally made a comment worthy of this fic' comment. apologies for the long wait.

ok. so. listen. i completely forgot all of my prompts so all soon as i saw pirates i was like !!!!!!! YEAH !!!!!! HELL YEAH !!!!! and then from there it just escalated bc loose morals navy Jongin? and spurned lover™ (but not really) Baekhyun??? YES. YES PLEASE. like i've read the fics where they're captured but all how dare u?? i will never fall to ur level. u pirate. but Jongin's all hell yeah hell yeah pirates! you want me to sell my old crew out? no prob. i'll sell my own mom out if i get to climb some sails!

and then, like, the Tragic Backstory of Baekhyun, Chanyeol, and Jongdae (my bbs) and wow. my heart. oh no.

and I have to tell you, my FAVORITE part is when Jongdae is telling him in the fricking leaking bottom of the ship bc this is Very Important and cannot wait. I snorted. Out loud. This is how powerful your words are. Also it's so vivid? Like, here's a starving, gross, pale Jongin who's probably almost knee-deep in crap water but he's enraptured as hell by this story..... but also a teeny bit annoyed bc Jongdae? really?

And then Jongin is like hey Baekhyun. U wanna go? Do some Stuff? Right now? (btw ur sex scene was nice as hell. almost poetic) And Baekhyun is like.... .shit (me too, Baek. me too). And he just fits right in there! And I love LOVE how each pirate has his own thing? Like Luhan sleeps with pretty girls and cooks food and minseok (god bless) fricking obliterates people. and jongdae/spiderman teaches jongin his tricks so that jongin can have his own..... im so happy about this Pirate Family. Also thank you so so much for making it ot12 i love you.

But yeah! I just! Have so many feelings about this fic? They are all positive? Also would love to see What Jongin and Baekhyun Got Up To While In Singapore. But this is a beautiful fic, thank you so so much for writing it. ❤❤❤

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