i read this the other day! I even talked about it on twitter and then forgot to leave a comment when i got back home T.T sorry
anyway, it was absolutely perfect. you built the pirate world so well, not just in their attitude but the way of living. i loved it. for example, when you described how Jongin was kept as a prisoner it felt very realistic, i loved that. I liked how you wrote their relationship before Jongin was captured and then how you built up the changes in jongin, like even if he already felt something strong for baekhyun, how he went from being a 'good guy' to actually killing for baek was great! very well written. Baekhyun was an amazing character and i loved the background story with chanyeol and jongdae. it was great to learn how everyone became a part of the crew. Also, the rest of the guys as side characters were great, Minseok especially lol
There were other things i liked as i read it, but i forgot now I do remember that this is one of my favorite quotes, because of the way it's written:
"They say the ship is so large it requires near two hundred men to sail it, each one stronger than the average man. They say the combined wealth of the crew is more than even the King’s. Out of all the things said by the colloquial they, it is usually the belief that the Lady Luck is crewed by demons and captained by the devil himself that brings the most fear."
anyway, it was absolutely perfect. you built the pirate world so well, not just in their attitude but the way of living. i loved it. for example, when you described how Jongin was kept as a prisoner it felt very realistic, i loved that.
I liked how you wrote their relationship before Jongin was captured and then how you built up the changes in jongin, like even if he already felt something strong for baekhyun, how he went from being a 'good guy' to actually killing for baek was great! very well written.
Baekhyun was an amazing character and i loved the background story with chanyeol and jongdae. it was great to learn how everyone became a part of the crew. Also, the rest of the guys as side characters were great, Minseok especially lol
There were other things i liked as i read it, but i forgot now
I do remember that this is one of my favorite quotes, because of the way it's written:
"They say the ship is so large it requires near two hundred men to sail it, each one stronger than the average man. They say the combined wealth of the crew is more than even the King’s. Out of all the things said by the colloquial they, it is usually the belief that the Lady Luck is crewed by demons and captained by the devil himself that brings the most fear."
i really liked that for some reason.
anyway, i loved the story!!
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