When The Cherry Blossoms Fade; for ambulanceu

[perfectingart]

Title: When The Cherry Blossoms Fade
For: ambulanceu
By: ANONYMOUS
Word count: 4.5k
Rating: R for themes.
Warnings: Major character death, non linear storyline, angst, so much angst
Summary: Maybe Jongin's selfish, but he just wants to hear Baekhyun sing one more time, wants to drape himself across Baekhyun's stomach and listen to how his heartbeat matches

Comments

[ambulanceu]

Okay so. First of all I just want to say thank you. Like, thank you.

I must admit that I forgot what prompts I gave but even after going back to check and realizing what prompt you wrote, my heart still wasn't prepared enough for this gjfsbkjrbjgsebrkj this was really pretty with all the descriptions and those little details and all those lines that just continuously broke my heart (am I allowed to say that I cried because I did) this entire story was just so wonderful and it flowed well and those descriptions of spring gave a really nice imagery considering that I live in a place which only has one season I could almost see it ;___;

"You're my only regret you know, if it doesn't work." has definitely got to be one of my favourite lines (I think the tears started around there but shhh)

And yet, Baekhyun is still smiling, weakly but beautiful, and Jongin wonders if Baekhyun smiles because that's all he knows, or if he smiles because that's all Jongin is supposed to know this line hurt a lot because Baekhyun had always been smiling through the videos but there's still the general tone of despair coming from Jongin in this fic and it feels like I want to hopeful but I can't and it just-- there was a really nice build up of how jongin just went through all the videos up till the end and I really loved it ;___;

I love angst so thank you for breaking my heart the best way possible I'm sorry if this comment isn't good enough but really I loved this and once again thank you!! ;_____: <3