OMG, I was utterly ridiculous when i noticed this chapter was here! *blushes*
awesome chapter! omg, things are looking up for these two!
"I'm still in love with him."
"Yes," said Long simply.
GAH! oh delicious angst. :(((( but...I feel SO AWFUL for Long! :( and at the same time...it just feels right that Jet let him go. that was probably so hard. :((
He loved Zuko so much, but he didn't trust him.
♥ Jet. I don't blame him for moving slow; I don't trust Zuko either, lol.
so...out of curiosity...is there to be anymore bee/toph in this story? like maybe a filler from chapter 1 following bee/toph into Bee's room after the movie? *whistles* ;)
THANK YOU so much for writing such awesomeness! This AU is as alive to me as canon, i just adore what you lovelies have created here! The chapter was worth the wait totally, but hard to wait for! ;)
So let me just do my impression of my thoughts as I was going along reading this: "Oh, I should really say something about how floored I've been the whole time I've been reading this by the naturalness of their dialogue, and how really distinct and striking the individual character voices are and how rare that is that somebody can do that well, and about how the both sides of the story thing is actually a really neat and novel device because it creates this really gripping tension sort of through dramatic irony and -- -- OH CRAP, HOT"
So you win again, is what I'm saying. I have to concur with the people saying they look forward to this like they look forward to actual new episodes. Love it.
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And it was worth it! Great chapter! I was heartbroken for Long. Kuruk had me laughing and Hahn and Zhao were perfect.
And Zuko and Jet just made me sigh. So utterly sweet and tragic at the same time.
Can't wait for more!
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you know, i think i missed the absence of this as much as i miss new eps of the actual show.
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Oh, I guess I hadn't read the... hmmm... last two chapters afterall. *goes back and read them* Yay!
hahaha, Zhao and Hahn's appartment. Awesome. RJ and Chan! Cuddling! Awesome!
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awesome chapter! omg, things are looking up for these two!
"I'm still in love with him."
"Yes," said Long simply.
GAH! oh delicious angst. :(((( but...I feel SO AWFUL for Long! :( and at the same time...it just feels right that Jet let him go. that was probably so hard. :((
He loved Zuko so much, but he didn't trust him.
♥ Jet. I don't blame him for moving slow; I don't trust Zuko either, lol.
so...out of curiosity...is there to be anymore bee/toph in this story? like maybe a filler from chapter 1 following bee/toph into Bee's room after the movie? *whistles* ;)
THANK YOU so much for writing such awesomeness! This AU is as alive to me as canon, i just adore what you lovelies have created here! The chapter was worth the wait totally, but hard to wait for! ;)
♥
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So let me just do my impression of my thoughts as I was going along reading this: "Oh, I should really say something about how floored I've been the whole time I've been reading this by the naturalness of their dialogue, and how really distinct and striking the individual character voices are and how rare that is that somebody can do that well, and about how the both sides of the story thing is actually a really neat and novel device because it creates this really gripping tension sort of through dramatic irony and -- -- OH CRAP, HOT"
So you win again, is what I'm saying. I have to concur with the people saying they look forward to this like they look forward to actual new episodes. Love it.
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