Chapter Sixteen

Jun 25, 2008 17:25

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Hey Beeautiful, staying over Zuko's tonight. See you tomorrow. Love you guys.

The tears on his face and the ache in his stomach were hot. )

chapter, jet

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ali_wildgoose June 25 2008, 21:52:22 UTC
<3

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ali_wildgoose June 26 2008, 00:11:12 UTC
Oh my god, what's going to happen next?!?!?!?!

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armistice_day June 25 2008, 22:56:42 UTC
Zhao didn't seem thrilled, but he was bearing up under his destiny pretty well.

This chapter is like a delicious tower! Haha, seriously, it has everything I like!
Unlike an actual edible tower, it didn't cost me a thing - but being as it was so good, I feel like it should've done!

Oh, Jet. <3

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armistice_day June 26 2008, 00:17:04 UTC
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OMG
AWESOME
TOWER

*appreciates you*

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etrangere June 26 2008, 00:13:44 UTC
Awesome! Totally cheered me up and I needed that. Poor Jet, so stressed out.

Hahn is made of win XD

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dianalw June 26 2008, 05:07:07 UTC
Ahhhhh, I have no brain to comment sensibly right now so please forgive me.

SDFSFAAJLA;OLA;JFOAI#$%!#! <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333

I love you so much... ^_^

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loveroftheflame June 26 2008, 12:09:25 UTC
Oh JET!!! Wow... this was so good! He's so nervous! It's absolutely adorable! And Zhao had me laughing and Hahn is so utterly perfect.

The grandmother! I really hope we see more of her. I loved her scene so very much.

Can't wait for more! Incredible job as usual. :DDD

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