Comments | perfect_duet: Fiction. Safe. Jack and Stephen. PG-13

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Fiction. Safe. Jack and Stephen. PG-13

Sep 05, 2011 22:41

TITLE: Safe
AUTHOR: Ashley-Pitt
FANDOM: Master and Commander
PAIRINGS: Jack Aubrey, Stephen Maturin
RATING: PG-13
CHALLENGE: Submitted for slashthedrabble #303--Past Prompts Revisited--#010--Touch ( Read more... )

drabble, author/artist: a, rating: pg-13

Comments 14

esteven September 6 2011, 04:26:32 UTC

Awwwwwwwwww. That's our Jack, there to provide a helpline when Stephen needs it most.

ashley_pitt September 6 2011, 10:42:31 UTC

Yep, our Jack is a good guy.

Thanks for reading.

amaraal September 6 2011, 06:28:30 UTC

“...his whole massive being poised to save his friend but all he could do was to occasional wipe Stephen’s brow.”

That catches it perfectly. Poor Stephen. How could POB do this to him? But he also gave him Jack :)

“I will never let you go, Stephen.”

Well done :)

ashley_pitt September 6 2011, 10:41:23 UTC

Thank you.

Good thing they do have each other.

( I did catch the typo, thanks)

rifleman_s September 6 2011, 07:20:39 UTC

Even in delerium there's such a strong bond between them.

Lovely. :)

ashley_pitt September 6 2011, 10:43:50 UTC

Stephen knows that Jack will always save him....somehow.

Thank you for reading!

gillianinoz September 6 2011, 09:04:55 UTC

Ah, very sweet indeed. I do love their bond and you caught it just right here.

ashley_pitt September 6 2011, 10:45:31 UTC

Thank you so much!

I was hoping that I had caught it rightly.

alltoseek September 7 2011, 19:09:50 UTC

Yep. It took POB 20 books but you have said it here in 200 words. Brava!

ashley_pitt September 8 2011, 10:42:02 UTC

Oh my!
Thank you so much.
I do love these two.