I could write this, sadly enough; but before I put myself and poor Jack through the trauma, my question is: Does the OP (or anyone else) really want to read it? This meme has become rather quiet...
The Commodore's Salute Part 1/2
anonymous
August 8 2010, 00:04:47 UTC
Captain Aubrey's mouth gaped in angry astonishment at the silly smug face across from him. He knew Harte would do him a bad turn any time he could - Harte had done so, again and again. But this was beyond belief - to controvert the late admiral's orders - in favor of a less-senior captain - impossible! Before he knew it, Aubrey had leaned over the table, grabbed Harte's neckcloth and dragged him back across, twisting the snug neckcloth tighter, so Harte's eyes bugged out and his tongue lolled from his open mouth, but he could not shout for the Marine guard just outside the door. Aubrey found his other fist drawn back, ready to turn that smug face into so much slush, but he hesitated. That scrub Harte had been waiting for a mistake like this for years. Once Aubrey struck a superior officer - even a God-damned lubberly infernal bugger like Harte - he was done for. And that was why Aubrey had swallowed insult after injury from Harte so often, and he was damned if he'd let Harte finally win after all these years
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The Commodore's Salute Part 2/2
anonymous
August 8 2010, 00:06:46 UTC
Aubrey looked down at Harte's face as it rubbed against his breeches. That sight and the sound of the gasps and moans coming through the gag gave him another idea. His right arm still administering the blows, with his left hand he undid his placket and lifted away the gag. He grabbed Harte's hair up tight against the back of his head and forced his mouth on his stiffening prick
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Re: The Commodore's Salute Part 2/2
anonymous
August 8 2010, 08:11:26 UTC
Something tells me this might actually turn out to be beneficial to Jack's career...
This should not make as much sense as it does. Kudos to you for managing to write something like this fic and make it in character! (Shame on you, because now I'll always suspect Harte of mistreating Jack because he hopes for that exact reaction.)
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Thank you very much indeed. I had no concept of how much I would enjoy this, and I don't even feel shamed.
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This should not make as much sense as it does. Kudos to you for managing to write something like this fic and make it in character! (Shame on you, because now I'll always suspect Harte of mistreating Jack because he hopes for that exact reaction.)
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I did think that this explained a lot about Harte while I was writing it. :-)
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I know, right? It's disturbing and yet it's not because it makes sense. Hats off to you, anonymous writer!
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