Advent Calendar Day 18: Fiction--The Eye of the Beholder

[ashley_pitt]

TITLE: The Eye of the Beholder
AUTHOR: Ashley-Pitt
GENRE: Slash
RATING: PG-13
WORD COUNT: 432
DISCLAIMER: I do not own these characters, nor am I making any money from them. I borrow them once in awhile, but put them away tidily.
A/N: This is my first attempt at a Jack/Stephen story. I hope I do them justice.

Comments

[esteven]

What shame they were interrupted! But maybe that means a sequel?
:D
Stephen noted with clinical pleasure the only slightly paunchy belly
So Jack had enough excercise that Stephen noted the only slightly paunch? That might indicate a prequel. :D

Thank you muchly for this fic.

[ashley_pitt]

Ohhh, a prequel....and a sequel...hmmmm...

You are very welcome.

It was prodigious fun.

[sidlj]

Oh, how I do love this image you have painted of sleeping Jack!

Silly enemy, interrupting this precious moment. *pouts*

But the gleam in Jack's eye is matched by the one in Stephen's, so all will be well. :-)

[ashley_pitt]

Oh, how I do love this image you have painted of sleeping Jack!

That was one of the two images that started the story idea.

Ideed, all will be well.

Thanks for reading!

[mattmel]

Oh bad bad enemy, for interrupting the discussion of fine 'Art'! ;)
Wonderful story, Stephen not being able to sleep sounds so true to me and Jack at once awake and concerned for his dear friend.

[ashley_pitt]

Yes, the enemy has not a whit of decorum.

Thank you! I am glad I held true to their characters.

[gillianinoz]

Ah, very charming and satisfying! Very very nice indeed - and more would be lovely as well.

[ashley_pitt]

Thank you so much!

and more would be lovely as well.

I will! Writing them is a bit addictive, isn't it?

[des_pudels_kern]

Ah, discussing art, that's what it's called these days, eh? *eyebrow wriggle*
I quite like the angsty beginning; Stephen angsts so well.

[ashley_pitt]

Hee....

Stepehn's middle name is angst.

Thank you for reading and commenting.