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Fic: Sunshine II

Sep 12, 2009 22:49

Title: Sunshine II
Pairing, Characters: Jack/Stephen
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: HMS Surprise
Disclaimer: Not mine, never has been, never will be.
Length: 1908 words
Status: One-shot, sequel to Sunshine here or here..
Summary: Dusk. It is finally getting cooler. Isn't it?
Author's Note: Written for latin_cat's birthday ( Read more... )

fanfiction, rating: nc-17, author/artist: d

Comments 28

esteven September 12 2009, 20:56:39 UTC

Not too long ago he thought these hands would never hold a quill again.
Much as I loved the heat and the porn, this was the sentence that touched me most.

Thank you for writing this sequel, and thank you for posting.

des_pudels_kern September 12 2009, 21:04:36 UTC

Thank you!

I'd say you are welcome, but I don't want to encourage you... ;)

esteven September 12 2009, 21:09:56 UTC

It is already to late for that. You have encouraged me to ask for more

Btw, *heaps cookies*

des_pudels_kern September 12 2009, 21:12:32 UTC

I what?!?

*nibbles*

Thread 7

tootsiemuppet September 13 2009, 02:29:16 UTC

I'm goingto go with the opposite of Em and say that much as I loved that sentence, I loved the heat and porn most.

des_pudels_kern September 13 2009, 07:58:37 UTC

*eyeroll* Of course you have to disagree.

*squishes* Thank you, Gilly.

ashley_pitt September 13 2009, 03:23:24 UTC

Wow...!

I must go and stand in front of the AC.

Very good.....

des_pudels_kern September 13 2009, 07:59:57 UTC

Thank you kindly. *curtsies* I'm glad you liked it, and sorry for the inconvenience. ;D

ylla September 13 2009, 09:46:40 UTC

I'm on the side of the line about the hands. And
The opportunities to joke with his friend were still too rare to let even one of them pass without grasping it, no matter his mood. :)

des_pudels_kern September 13 2009, 09:55:39 UTC

Glad you liked! :) Hee, I could separate it into a non-slash part and a slash part, Sunshine IIa and Sunshine IIb.

ylla September 13 2009, 10:37:52 UTC

Well, I love them loving each other, however they go about it :)
But I'm not really much of a slasher

des_pudels_kern September 13 2009, 10:48:06 UTC

That's fine! Me, I'm a slash girl through and through, but as far as I'm concerned to each their own, as long as it doesn't hurt anybody. Het!shippers are people, too.
And when it comes to writing, I'm usually not that much of a slasher either. This here is longer and a lot slashier than my usual scribbles.

Thread 6

cats_paws September 13 2009, 16:20:07 UTC

Strangely, even though Stephen was now as hot and sticky as him, the heat didn't bother Jack anymore.
*laughs*
Aw, your fics are lovely, why are you bashful about posting them? You don't need to be.

des_pudels_kern September 13 2009, 16:29:01 UTC

*curtsies* Thank you, I aim to please! But English is difficult (not that I'd be able to write in German), as are character voices, and, while I have long outgrown the urge to giggle when sex is mentioned, I was blushing fiercly while writing this.

cats_paws September 13 2009, 16:46:13 UTC

*Brushes aside protests* Clearly you have no problem with language or characterisation (though beta-reading is not such a bad thing...)
I do not think I will ever outgrow the urge to giggle at sex, it is inherently funny :-D Thank you for writing and posting and making me smile.

des_pudels_kern September 22 2009, 14:47:21 UTC

(Once I manage to get over the urge to drop these here and then immediately run as fast and as far as I can...)