Fic: Necking (Sam/Jack, PG, Valentines #12)

Jun 05, 2009 17:52

Title: Necking
Author: Pepper
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1627
Summary: He'd nearly kissed her neck.
Season: One
Pairing(s): Sam/Jack
A/N: With thanks to holdouttrout, who gave me a deadline.

Valentines series:
1: Intruder Alert
2: Sweet, Cute, Tacky
3: Days Of Wine And Roses
4: Unprofessional
5: Etiquette
6: Four's Company
7: The Wrong Man
8: The Kirk Syndrome9 ( Read more... )

stargate fic, valentines, sam/jack

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aelfgyfu_mead June 5 2009, 17:01:37 UTC
You know I'm really not a shipper on this show, but for the scene with the three guys in the gym, this story has given me a great big grin! (I hope that's not damning with faint praise.)

Daniel may be right about Jack, but he's not exactly the picture of eloquence here himself! As usual, Teal'c pwns them all--but Daniel is much clearer about why Jack should leave things as they are.
"So, you know, just," Daniel waved his hand encouragingly, "muddle through like before. And for goodness' sake, don't talk about it."

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pepper_field June 5 2009, 17:11:41 UTC
Hee - no, not damned by faint praise at all! On the contrary, I'm extremely flattered you're reading it, being that you're not a shipper! :)

And heh, well, I was inspired by the scene in Threshold where Daniel is supposed to do the talking... and completely fails. *g*

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aelfgyfu_mead June 5 2009, 17:46:23 UTC
You mean this one, when the two of them are at Teal'c's bedside?
J: "You wanna go first?"
D: "Sure."
Long pause.
J: "I'll go."
D: "Yep."

I love that. Daniel can indeed be eloquent when he's on a roll, but he can also get tongue-tied, tangled up in his words, and many other things.

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pepper_field June 5 2009, 17:59:53 UTC
That's the one - it cracked me up.

I think he's capable of playing tongue-tied, too - I mean, sometimes no doubt he really is, but I think it's possible he uses it as a way of disarming or distracting.

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katcorvi June 5 2009, 17:22:16 UTC
Teal'c really does pwn them all!

I love this installment. ::big, stupid grin on my face::

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pepper_field June 5 2009, 17:51:27 UTC
Of course he does. *g*

And hee, thank you! Jack's such fun to write.

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holdouttrout June 5 2009, 18:25:45 UTC
OH MY GOODNESS. ♥

So, you know, just," Daniel waved his hand encouragingly, "muddle through like before. And for goodness' sake, don't talk about it."

ha ha ha! Is Daniel a closet fic-writer? Because it almost seems like he's channeling Annerb here. *g*

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pepper_field June 5 2009, 18:55:50 UTC
Heh! Yes, Daniel and Teal'c do seem to be arguing for the most fanfic-friendly path, don't they? They're probably just doing it because they find it entertaining. *g*

And thank you for the push. :)

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holdouttrout June 5 2009, 18:59:02 UTC
And thank you for the push. :)

Does that mean I can give you another deadline? Like say...Monday? ;-)

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pepper_field June 5 2009, 19:05:27 UTC
Gah! Well... okay. It might be the only way I'll get this damn series finished. Hee.

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aurora_novarum June 5 2009, 18:47:50 UTC
Hee! Adore the three guys bantering in the workout room.

"Still right here."

Love Jack's voice throughout this.

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pepper_field June 5 2009, 19:04:24 UTC
Aw, thank you! I was having a nightmare with the pronouns - writing three men having a discussion is a pain. *g*

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thothmes June 7 2009, 07:40:55 UTC
Eeeeee! Hilarity! Jack and Daniel having one of their non-discussion discussions! Teal'c-y goodness! And I didn't have to wait a year for it. Can we get Trout to threaten you on a regular -and (necessarily) frequent - basis?

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