Por si éramos pocos by Belenuski - chapter 8 (part 7)

[lovelyafterglow]

Title: Por si éramos pocos by Belenuski
Rating: PG-13

NB: Here's more...I hope everybody's still hanging in there! Read, enjoy, comment...gracias. :-)

Comments

Review

[emmatravers]

Wow that seemed so real. Please continue I loved it :) what's this mountain eh? I want to know lol and I already hate David with a passion ;)
x

Re: Review

[lovelyafterglow]

Thanks for commenting, emma!

Now, forgive me if I'm wrong, but your comment seems to suggest that this is the first part of the story that you're reading. If that's case, I just wanted to point out that there's a whoooole lot of story before this part, the "mountain" being the giant mess of problems that's been accumulating for years now. If I'm totally off base, though...please just ignore my rambling. :-P

I have to agree with your sentiments towards David, he really is easy to hate, haha. I'm glad you enjoyed the update!

Re: Review

[emmatravers]

Oh! Nono you're right! I didnt realise. Thanks for pointing that out. Im new to this site, it's kinda hard figuring out how to begin to read a story. I just got a notification saying you posted something in the journal then so read it. Is there an easier way to read a whole collection of stories by someone than having to scroll through their calendar? Because sometimes many story chapters are mixed up in the calendar.

Do you mind pointing me in the right direction? lol xD

Though have to say if that had been a begining chapter, it was a great one to draw a new reader into the story (me!)
xx

Re: Review

[lovelyafterglow]

Haha, no problem...I'm glad I said something!

The easiest way to look for all the posts of a particular story is to use the tags. The tags are at the bottom of all the posts in the community, so in this case, you just have to click on "fanfiction: por si eramos pocos", and you'll get all the previous posts. And it'd be the same deal for any other story, too.

Now, I'm not actually writing this story myself. The original is written in Spanish, and I'm just translating it to English so more people can read it, but if you go back and read the rest of the story, please let me know what you think. And, let me know if you need anymore help navigating around the site!

[girlechick]

Woah! That was heavy. I've said this before but I'll say it again. It's like watching a car crash, you want to look away but you can't.
This is so frickin' addictive! Better than any soap on T.V.
All I know is that there's going to be a happy ending....Well, at least I hope there's going to be a happy ending. That and some hot make up sex!. :P

Thanks for the update Lovely! :D

[lovelyafterglow]

*hands you some popcorn*

Might as well get comfy and have a snack as you wait for the car to crash into smithereens. :-P

And, okay, okay...I'm gonna be slightly spoilerific: happy ending and hot make up sex are a definite. So, sit back and relax (as much as you possibly can because there's still A LOT of drama ahead. :-D)

[girlechick]

Wohoo!! Hot make up sex! Can't frickin wait! But by the sounds of it, I'll be waiting for a bit. Luckily I have the patience of a saint! :D

[lovelyafterglow]

St. Girlechicky

[trinigirl22]

A brunette with green eyes?? Who is Silvia referring to???

[lovelyafterglow]

It's Pepa. I think she has more hazel/brown eyes...but I've read several fics where her eyes were described as green. *shrug* I thought about changing the color in my translation, but Belenuski went with green, so I though it'd be best to stick to her description.

[girlechick]

I always thought her eyes were a light brown. Nevermind!

[lovelyafterglow]

I think they're brown, too...but I've seen some pictures where they look greenish.

[vickiheartpepsi]

Hi lovely :)
haven't commented for a while *pouts*
and i'm suprised ur still translating this (and thankful) since heaps of people haven't been posting lately :(
well anyway thanks heaps for still translating this for the ppl hu r still sticking to the PepSi community :)
<3
oh and this is really "angsty" xP

[lovelyafterglow]

I know...things have slowing down quite a bit - here, at AE, and even in the Spanish forums. I really think the whole Peker thing was kinda the last blow for a lot of the fans...things haven't quite been the same since that news dropped. :-/

I'll still be here to finish this story and my other two, though! I hope the fanfic in this community will live on for a while at least...

And, yes, it IS angsty, hahaha. But, at least neither one of them will die in this story, so there's always that!

tks

[sobeit88]

Tks for the translation, made my day!

Re: tks

[lovelyafterglow]

You're quite welcome!