the first step

Aug 06, 2010 07:30

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citruslover August 10 2010, 03:33:40 UTC
I don't think I can put together a coherent comment for this, but I loved it so much! I love that Lance looks like his grandpa. lol Such a surreal situation, yet such a down to earth and endearing atmosphere. Great job!

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pensnest August 10 2010, 12:11:05 UTC
Thank you-I'm surprised at how fond I am of this little fic, given that the idea arrived out of nowhere and got written in a hurry. Glad you enjoyed it.

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nopseud August 11 2010, 01:20:50 UTC
I missed this when you posted it -- is it one of your posts that went invisible?

Anyway, I loved it. I'm kind of a little bit choked up here. It seems very *Lance*, that he's want to do something incredibly cool like time travel even though he didn't actually want to tell himself to do anything different. Just for the experience, and to show himself that it all turns out wonderful.

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pensnest August 11 2010, 07:33:54 UTC
There's probably all sorts of time paradox stuff that he didn't want to be bothered with... or something! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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trumpeterofdoom August 11 2010, 03:00:41 UTC
LANCE. LANCE. I JUST.

LANCE!!!

(translation: JM is happy)

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pensnest August 11 2010, 07:34:54 UTC
*beams* Glad to hear it.

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pensnest September 2 2010, 20:46:48 UTC
Thank you! I have a surprising amount of love for this story myself, considering it arrived out of nowhere and just... well, here it is. :-)

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Love this! runzu July 21 2011, 10:48:54 UTC
*rubs eyes*

So sweet!!!

*rubs eyes even more fiercely*

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Re: Love this! pensnest July 21 2011, 12:59:53 UTC
Thank you! I'm very fond of this little story.

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