It Should Be Me, Part 15/15

Apr 25, 2010 23:50


Title: It Should Be Me
Chapter: 15/15
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Rating: NC-17
Words:  5345
Summary:  When Rachel's driving everyone crazy before Regionals, the glee club recruits Puck to relax her.  Will he succeed or will he make everything worse?  And what will Finn think of this?
Spoilers:  Only up to 'Sectionals' though stuff from the back 9 may pop in if ( Read more... )

puck/rachel, glee

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morethanateam April 26 2010, 16:43:33 UTC
awwwww! that was definitely the perfect ending! i can't even get started on the class ring! it's too adorable!

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penny1200 April 26 2010, 17:09:51 UTC
Thank you so much! I looked around for something else for him to give her, but I just didn't like anything else more than the classic class ring.

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lunamystik April 26 2010, 17:05:55 UTC
Puck giving Rachel his class ring reminds me of Danny giving it to Sandy in Grease... albeit in a less awkward way!

I'm sad to see this fic end... I really loved reading it, and can't wait for your next one.

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penny1200 April 26 2010, 17:12:32 UTC
I wasn't even thinking about Danny and Sandy, maybe because I always thought that was less about Danny wanting to commit to her and more about him wanting to have sex.

I'm happy with how this fic turned out (though it took some unexpected turns in places). My next fic will be a futurefic, with the prologue set the summer after Rachel graduates from high school. I already know what I want the first couple of chapters to look like.

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motylik April 26 2010, 17:17:45 UTC
Amazing! *claps* I'm so sad it's over. This was such a great fic. I'm happy that Mercedes apologized and Kurt at least realized his error. I loved that Quinn, Britanny, Santana and Tina cared enough to check up on Rachel. :D <3 Awesome!

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penny1200 April 26 2010, 17:24:50 UTC
Thank you so much! I have to admit that I'm kind of glad the story is over. It stands at nearly 90000 words, so I'm definitely ready to move onto my next idea (I already know what I want the first couple of chapters to look like).

I like the interaction between the five girls. And, I figured that out of the two of them, Mercedes would be the one most likely to apologize (and defend herself that she did tell Puck so that he could put a stop to Kurt's plan).

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motylik April 26 2010, 20:33:53 UTC
Yay! New idea. That sounds promising. :D :D Can't wait to see what you come up with.

I agree. She's the one who looked at least a bit apologetic on the show too. :)

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kimmy_77 April 26 2010, 17:26:55 UTC
aww what a great ending! hot and sexy and very sweet! i love that he gave her his class ring.

i can't wait to read your next story! **HUGS**

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penny1200 April 26 2010, 18:00:23 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story(ies)! I looked for something other than the class ring, but I finally decided to just go with the classic because nothing else felt right.

I already know how I want the first couple of chapters of my next story to look. It will be a futurefic that starts the summer after Rachel graduates from high school.

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kimmy_77 April 26 2010, 18:02:30 UTC
Oh you're most welcome! I think the class ring was perfect. It's actually the first P/R story that I've read where he gave her his class ring.

Yay! New story! CAN'T WAIT!!!

:)

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iheartpuck April 26 2010, 18:21:43 UTC
I loved this so much. I really liked your other fic to by the way so I guess that makes me a fan as I am waiting with baited breath for your next story. You make Puck even more sexy if that's possible, no wonder Rachel can't resist him, seriously. Loved the build up and Puck chasing Rachel she so deserves that for a change. Well done air kisses.

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penny1200 April 27 2010, 00:05:51 UTC
I'm actually going to start working on my next story tonight.

I don't know that it's possible to make him even sexier, but if it is then yay! I agree that Rachel deserved someone to chase after her for once.

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