Fill: Find a Way to You - Chapter Fourteen

[pennin_ink]

Story Type: Prompt Fill
Fandom(s): Sherlock/The Swan Princess/Swan Lake
Characters: Sherlock, John, Lestrade, Molly, Moriarty, Moran, Mycroft, Harry, Ann Watson, Vienne Holmes, Mike Stamford
Pairing(s): Sherlock/John, suggested Moriarty/Moran, very twisted semi-Moriarty/Sherlock
Warnings: Violence, torture, abduction, coersion, Jim Moriarty with access

Comments

[noirrosaleen]

AHHHHH. AHHH, AHHH, AHHH. MORE NOW KTHNXBAI.

My life is becoming drowned in stranger-than-fiction drama and finals in 2 weeks is NOT helping. I would so much rather just curl up inside your story.

(Maybe I'll go read "Bound In Gold" for another hit of your writing. I NEEEEEED IT, MAN.)

[pennin_ink]

Bound in Gold is an endless, writhing temptation to re-write. I've got the sequel almost finished, it just takes a while because I only write it when I'm struggling with Find a Way to You, as a way to clear the clutter out of my head so I can focus again.

But by all means. The first couple parts are the best, with the most world building, after that I'm unhappy with a lot of it and I want to incorporate less of the first episode and more original content.

And of course there's sex in the last chapter. It was part of the prompt so I did it. Novice work, but people seem to like it.

[titania2006]

Dude shut up Bound in Gold was awesome. I mean, any story can always improve from further editing, but everyone loves your work.

[pennin_ink]

Not everyone. I've actually gotten the most negative reviews on BiG of all my stories.

It's good, yes, but clumsy. And mainly Steven Moffat wrote it, which doesn't sit well with me.

The sequel is utterly unconnected to the series, and when I reach the Blind Banker part of the story, I'll be branching off into an entirely different direction. Sarah, for one, is going to be an interesting ride.

[titania2006]

Haha yes, I suppose "everyone" was an exaggeration given I don't actually know everyone on the planet. ^_^ Still, it was good. Like you said, of course you can improve it, but it's gotten recced to me a million times, so it can't be all bad!

That said, SO EXCITED FOR THE SEQUEL DUDE.

[pennin_ink]

*blink, blink*

Seriously?

I mean, I know it's made the rounds on Tumblr a bit, and it's on one rec list I know of, but really?

Though, I would like to one day write a fic that gets as much attention as, say, The Theory of Narrative Causality or Alone on the Water (though I'd never write one as sad as that).

[titania2006]

For the love of all that is holy, please do not write anything like Alone on the Water. MY CREYS.