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Lovers, Don/Charlie, Numb3rs

Oct 10, 2005 10:03

Title: Lovers (3/3)
Authors: Penguingal and Schnaucl
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Don/Charlie
Warnings: incest, light bondage, dirty talk
Disclaimer: Oh how we wish this belonged to us
Feedback: Please oh please
A/N: The *ahem* thrilling conclusion. Don't say I never did nothing for ya. ;D

Part 1: Brothers

Part 2: Friends

( Lovers )

Comments 151

flawed_karma October 10 2005, 15:05:24 UTC

Wow. Just...wow.

Hot, sweet, tender with just the right amount of tension and guilt and worry about social mores but the basic greed of need and want rising up, strong enough to break social taboos..just amazing.

You two have really, really captured the relationship, I think. All of it from angry disbelief to timid, flawed acceptance.

Amazing, simply amazing. I'm in awe.

And I hereby retire from comment porn because there's no way I can compete with that!

penguingal October 10 2005, 15:09:58 UTC

And I hereby retire from comment porn because there's no way I can compete with that!

Awww, no! You and I write good stuff together. I shall be sad if we never comment porn together again.

And thank you so much for your lovely feedback. It means so much. Cyn and I are working on something else at the moment that is significantly darker. We have sworn to do a happy, playful Don next because we're both inches from going slightly berzonkers. :D

1trackmind October 10 2005, 17:46:44 UTC

And I hereby retire from comment porn because there's no way I can compete with that!

No, don't say that! I love reading your comment porn!

The Morning After penguingal November 15 2005, 21:20:12 UTC

Don lifted his head, the first few rays of morning shining through the gap in the curtains, and looked behind him. Sometime during the night, he'd rolled onto his side, the three of them now spooned together, Charlie's hand on his hip, Cooper's hand on Charlie's arm. Grabbing Charlie's wrist, he lifted it gently so he could turn to face them again without waking him. He wanted to look. He always wanted to look. He resettled himself, starting when he realized that a pair of bright blue eyes were smiling at him. "Hi," Don whispered.

"Hi," Coop whispered back, a grin on his face. To Don he still looked like he was floating from the night before. He propped himself up, eyes dropping from Don to the still sleeping-figure next to them. "God, he's beautiful," he murmured, running one light finger along the curve of Charlie's spine, an intimate gesture that yesterday would have driven Don mad with jealousy.

But today he just smiled, looking at Charlie with all the love and affection he could muster, murmuring back, "Yes he is. And so are

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celinafairy October 10 2005, 15:23:02 UTC

WHOA, the dirty talk was... hell yessss :D:D:D This was great. I loved all of it. Especially the last part, the insecurities of Charlie's and Don not being able to look into the mirror. Very deep. And the sex was fantastic ^___^

penguingal October 10 2005, 15:27:31 UTC

WHOA, the dirty talk was... hell yessss

LOL... yeah, I even got Cyn calling me evol with that.

Glad you enjoyed these! Thanks for reading.

severusslave October 10 2005, 15:42:44 UTC

*dances* Part Three. Yay.
*pouts* Last Part. Hnn.
*reads*
*squees* Sexy!

penguingal October 11 2005, 13:23:59 UTC

LOL... thanks!

severusslave October 11 2005, 13:39:32 UTC

You're welcome! *applauses*

hydesakura October 10 2005, 15:47:00 UTC

You guyz are Absolute Geniuses! The fic was soooo hot. Loved it.
Congrats on you excellent collaboration.

penguingal October 11 2005, 13:23:40 UTC

Hehehe... thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed!

justabi October 10 2005, 17:57:47 UTC

"D - did you watch me, Charlie? Devour me--God--devour me with those big doe eyes of yours? Would you--you jerk off later? Thinking of me? Of m-my ass in those jeans, my--my arms in that shirt?"

Gnuh. Hottttttest thing ever. *in a happy place*

penguingal October 11 2005, 13:23:14 UTC

Yeah, that's one of my personal favorite sections. That and getting Charlie to bottom from the top. That... I love that.

*visits your happy place*

cat_willow October 12 2005, 05:44:29 UTC

That and getting Charlie to bottom from the top. That... I love that.

And that's part of what makes them both such complicated characters, separately and together. They (or we) never know what they're going to do from one time to the next - how conflicted they'll be, how frightened, how confident. We may think we understand the dominant/aggressive/submissive relationship between Don and Charlie, but you do a wonderful job of turning it all around. Nothing's ever simple for them, really, which is a big part of their appeal.

That and the OMG oxygen sucking hotness.... *cough*

Very good capper to a terrific series! A lot to enjoy and to think about, w/o the requisite 3 boxes of tissues (okay, maybe 1). :D