Something Blue (3/3)

Jun 02, 2009 23:44

Title: Something Blue (3/3)
Fandom: Torchwood
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: graphic dub-con, spoilers through 2x09
Summary: After Gwen’s wedding, Jack is hurt, Ianto is forgiving, and things go too far.
Notes: Thank you all for your reviews! :) I’m glad this has been coming along in-character and realistic up to this point. This chapter is a bit longer, but ( Read more... )

intentional fanfiction, torchwood

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jay_kateel June 3 2009, 04:17:52 UTC
This was really, really good! I think you were right about the lack of confrontation. They hardly ever fight those two! No, slow is best for them. I mean, it took Jack like five minutes to ask Ianto out on a date, and then confirm that yes, they were going on a date ... Etc, etc.

No, this was perfect. I really enjoyed this story! Look forward to more from you!

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sequel maggieann452 June 3 2009, 10:36:02 UTC
so in character for both men. A sequel ? most definately positively it screams out for one. And so do we.

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Re: sequel kuhori_rei June 3 2009, 17:32:45 UTC
Thank you! A sequel is in the works. :)

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kuhori_rei June 3 2009, 17:31:22 UTC
That was my thought. They're not the type to have a huge blowout fight. Just because they deal with things calmly doesn't mean everything's okay.

Thank you so much!

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morwencath June 3 2009, 04:30:46 UTC
This was very good, I kept checking back hoping for this part to be posted. I would love to see you continue this.

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

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kuhori_rei June 3 2009, 17:43:37 UTC
Thank you so much!

There's a sequel in the works, keep an eye out. :)

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woodencoyote June 3 2009, 04:36:12 UTC
This was very good, thank you for sharing it. You're right in saying that they're not the type to have a big blow-up confrontation.

If you're going to do a sequel I'd certainly read it.

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kuhori_rei June 3 2009, 17:51:38 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! I definitely don't think they're the type to have a major fight. They're both the talk-it-through types, even if Jack's a little crazy, and Ianto wouldn't do a big blow-out. :)

There's a sequel being written--keep an eye out. :)

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seether_79 June 3 2009, 04:45:04 UTC
A great ending! Ianto was very in-character, which is something I really love. Thanks so much for posting :D

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kuhori_rei June 3 2009, 17:52:06 UTC
Thank you! I was trying to keep them both in-character, which was a lot harder in this chapter than in the others. :)

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pecos June 3 2009, 04:50:21 UTC
Very nicely done, and I like the ending just the way it is. A sequel would be very much welcome.

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kuhori_rei June 3 2009, 17:52:24 UTC
Thank you! There's a sequel in the works. :)

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