Fic: Headtrip (6/7)

[pen37]

Spoiler warning: I came up for the idea for this fic long before there were spoiler warnings that Supernatural was going to be doing something similar this season.  Just in case, though: If you don't want to be spoiled for a future episode, don't read. 
Fic: Headtrip (6/7) 
Series: Special Projects
Summary: On their way to Metropolis for Christmas,

Comments

[welshchicky]

I've been lurking around this story for a while now, adding the odd comment here or there but I thought it was time to leave a proper review.

This is such a good story, the way you weaved the three characters together and even though you've put Chloe and Dean together I'm glad you haven't put Sam in the back. He's such a strong character in here, and you can clearly tell how much he cares about both of them and how he's come to accept Chloe as part of their family.

And Chloe, she has to be one of my favourite tv characters and you've added more depth to her than the show will ever do. Her interactions with the boys is amazing, especially with Dean, their relationship is presented as believable as is her relationship with the justice league.

Dean, he is so adorable (yes, I said adorable lol) his insecurities and his issues are dealt with so well, especially the ones he has with protecting Sam and now Chloe. I could talk forever about his relationship with Chloe, but I won't lol What makes this series one of my favourites, is the further development you've given Dean, he hasn't gotten there yet but you can see he going to.

Now to talk about this chapter lol I enjoyed what you did with Chloe and Dean's characters, how Dean saw some of Chloe's struggles to become who she is and where her insecurities came from. I hope Chloe and Dean eventually talk about his, as I want both of them to see how Dean views himself. The last line of the chapter is so Dean, I have no doubt that he'll find his brother. I hope there's going to be more soon, I'll think I'll end it here lol

[pen37]

Thank you. This means a lot to me. I've felt like it's been a constant struggle to keep the Chloe/Dean interaction from overshadowing Sam.

Part of what makes Supernatural such a good show is the brother relationship between Sam and Dean. More than anything, I didn't want to lose that in the process of creating something new with having Chloe/Dean relationship and Chloe/Sam friendship.

thanks for reading, and reviewing. I treasure every review I get.