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Fic: Down the Only Road I've Ever Known (7/7)

Oct 17, 2007 07:02

Fic: Down the Only Road I've Ever Known (7/7)
Summary: The Impala breaks down in the remote Appalacians, where folks keep to themselves and resent outside intrusion. Sam, Dean and Chloe discover how hard this makes hunting.
Author: pen37
Beta: Clarksmuse
Fandoms: Smallville/Supernatural
Characters: Chloe, Sam, Dean
Pairing:Chloe/Dean
Rating: Pg (It's ( Read more... )

special projects, crossovers_100, supernatural, chloe, chloe/dean, sam, smallville, dean

Comments 23

destinysdragon October 17 2007, 15:03:26 UTC

ahhh, dean was being cute. i hope they get their happily ever after. once again, i admire chloe's resolve. If i had a willing dean in front of me, i don't think i could turn him down...

pen37 October 17 2007, 15:49:45 UTC

I'm a big believer in happy endings. And I totally agree about Chloe's resolve in the face of a willing Dean. But it remains to be seen how much resolve she has in the face of a determined, stubborn Dean?

*hee* We're just going to have to see who is more stubborn ;)

cailet_06 October 17 2007, 15:03:58 UTC

Yay! A happy ending is always enjoyable. However sometimes to many 100 % happy endings are unbelievable. (If that makes any sense.) But I love how your stories have a good balance to them. Can't wait for the next one!

pen37 October 17 2007, 15:51:39 UTC

Thanks! Now that clarksmuse and I have worked the kinks out of it, I should start posting the next story tomorrow. I tend to take these stories wherever the Muse leads me. But this one -- my muse got a little darker than I like.

Sometimes that happens. Overall, I'm glad I didn't try to lighten up the story. I think it made for good reading as it is. And Supernatural is kinda dark anyway.

luke2 October 17 2007, 15:12:51 UTC

I get why Chloe went running. Saving the baby is much more important then Michael, and I have to agree with Dean. It was nice to have a good old fashion ghost hunt and a sort of happy ending.

I also liked the conversation between Dean and Sam at the end of this. It was just so them.

pen37 October 17 2007, 15:52:39 UTC

Thanks! Sometimes I feel like I don't write enough 'purely brothers' stuff.

*shrugs* I'm working on it.

luke2 October 17 2007, 16:28:49 UTC

I think you've done a good job weaving in Sam and Dean's relationship. They tend to snark and hunt, interact with other people, then have profound brotherly moment together. That's definitely been in the series, and with a third person in their life, it can be hard to have those just them moments, but it's just another adjustment their making. Chloe gets that they need it, which will make the process easier, but they still need time to get use to being a threesome. In the non-dirty sense of course. ;o)

pen37 October 17 2007, 17:00:26 UTC

Thanks! Being female, I have more of a tendency to identify with chloe, and write things around her. I've really tried hard not to overlook anyone. Especially considering how many 'supporting characters' that I've weaved in and out of the story.

It's a lot easier in fanfic than it would be on TV, that's for certain. Here, If I need the extra space to develop something, I just write a longer story. ;)

amarin_rose October 17 2007, 15:49:17 UTC

Oh, wow. I wasn't expecting that. Nice ending. :)

pen37 October 17 2007, 15:52:55 UTC

Thank you very much!

sixpacschic October 17 2007, 21:56:14 UTC

Fantastic! *snickers* Happy ending. Dean's such a perv sometimes.

pen37 October 17 2007, 22:33:45 UTC

*nods* That's part of his appeal. Sorta. The attractive packaging helps. ;)