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Fic: Down the Only Road I've Ever Known (2/7)

Oct 09, 2007 16:58

Fic: Down the Only Road I've Ever Known (2/7)
Summary: The Impala breaks down in the remote Appalacians, where folks keep to themselves and resent outside intrusion. Sam, Dean and Chloe discover how hard this makes hunting.
Author: pen37
Beta: Clarksmuse
Fandoms: Smallville/Supernatural
Characters: Chloe, Sam, Dean
Pairing:Chloe/Dean
Rating: Pg (It's ( Read more... )

special projects, crossovers_100, supernatural, chloe, chloe/dean, sam, smallville, dean

Comments 17

angelbsb October 10 2007, 00:56:16 UTC

good for chloe to be showing cean there's more to life then hunting and sex . to get to know a person before sleeping with them . and also for making dean understand that he's a great man for more then just hunting and sex . i love how chloe is being fair to sam's feelings. i see why chloe's holding dean from her at arm's lenth . she's afriad of putting her heart out there , because of how she put it out there for clark . chloe has no idea that dean's been hurt before by a woman he loved just like chloe was hurt by clark . keep up the great work can not wait for the next chapter of this story .

pen37 October 10 2007, 03:31:07 UTC

Yep, Chloe and Dean are quite a bit alike. And between them, they don't just have issues, they have volumes that have been hard bound and cataloged in periodicals. ;)

sixpacschic October 10 2007, 01:24:01 UTC

Great part. Sam's the best brother in the world.

pen37 October 10 2007, 03:31:33 UTC

LOL! Yes he is.

anonymous October 10 2007, 02:21:24 UTC

Wow Chloe's got some willpower, turning down sleeping between Sam and Dean but I guess it would be kinda incesty. And I can totally see teenage Dean watching Julia Childs. Sam needs to hurry up with the food because this town is creeping me out in a Vacancy sorta way. Can't wait for the next update.

pen37 October 10 2007, 03:34:01 UTC

Thanks. I think Chloe and sam look at each other in a best friend/sibling kind of way. So they're not really into sharing the bed three way.

Dean was totally sam's caretaker, so I could see him learning to cook for Sam. Especially if sam was a picky eater. Because Dean can't refuse Sam anything.

Think the town is creepy now?

luke2 October 10 2007, 15:41:20 UTC

I so needed this today. It was fantastic chapter and this line:

He'd figure out what they were fangirling about later. Right now his other girl needed his full attention.

Totally made my day, and have me in giggles. Oh Dean. And, the Sam/Chloe friendship stuff was great. I love seeing Dean, Chloe and Sam as one somewhat happy family.

The kissing game was so awesome and sweet and HOT!

pen37 October 10 2007, 17:23:06 UTC

Awww! Thanks! Your feedback made me feel so happy. I never thought I would be the type to get all emo over slow fb, but I think I got spoiled over the summer, when people were reading instead of watching tv.

Glad you liked this! This chapter was one of my favorites. Both for the kissing and the sam and chloe moments of friendship.

bizkitprinzess October 10 2007, 17:21:29 UTC

I can feel the creepy of this town slowly rolling up to the station and I can't wait to find out the extent of the creepy.

pen37 October 10 2007, 17:24:48 UTC

Thanks! Clarksmuse can tell you that I utterly obsess over my fics. so having someone tell me that they liked it, and what worked for them is so helpful.