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pen37

Fic: People Are Strange (2/6)

Apr 08, 2008 08:39

Fic: People Are Strange (2/6)
Series: Special Projects
Summary: Dean and Chloe head to Houston to help out an old friend while Sam and Sarah do their own sleuthing.
Author: pen37
Beta: Strangevisitor7 and Clarksmuse
Fandoms: Smallville/Supernatural
Characters: Chloe, Sam, Dean, Sarah
Pairing:Chloe/Dean Sam/Sarah
Rating: pg-13
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special projects, sam/sarah, smallville, supernatural, chloe/dean

Comments 21

luke2 April 8 2008, 13:54:12 UTC

I really enjoyed the conversation between Sam and Dean, and then the Sam/Sarah stuff that followed was great. I think Sammy has found his girl. :D

pen37 April 8 2008, 14:17:50 UTC

Sam seems to like pushy driven women, dosen't he? And he's intuitive enough to figure out what's bugging Dean.

lyonza April 8 2008, 14:09:32 UTC

*sigh* I like the way you have the story go from Dean & Chloe over to Sam & Sarah with the phone call. And the conversations are just great - I agree, Sam has found "THE ONE".

pen37 April 8 2008, 14:19:25 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it. Sam hadn't had the best of luck with girls, which is sad because he's got a big heart. It's about time he had a relationship work out for him. :)

fonapola April 8 2008, 14:26:55 UTC

Ha! Of course something's wrong if Dean's not making an inappropriate comment. Sad, but true :)

Nice!

pen37 April 8 2008, 14:32:25 UTC

He's Dean. If you expect poetry, you should watch Grey's Anatomy.

kriptkeeper April 8 2008, 16:13:07 UTC

I love the phone conversation - Sam knowing something's off from the lack of prying, seeing the parallel in the Mackenzies, and the way Sam apologizes and Dean's reaction! You do the brother-interaction so well!!

And good for Sarah, ready to help with anything (even if Sam does get in some protectiveness at the end)! Awesome chapter!

pen37 April 8 2008, 16:44:32 UTC

I'm not always sure I do brother interaction well. I've been working harder at trying to write guys. Unfortunately, I have a girl brain.

So I appreciate the complement.

angelbsb April 8 2008, 18:03:40 UTC

dean kills me about wanting to know all about sam's sex life lol. i am loving sahra being in sam'a life . keep up the great work . and i hope you feel better soon being sick sucks . i know i got a cold right now .

pen37 April 8 2008, 18:06:16 UTC

I'm gradually getting better. Sleep and lots of fluids helps. But the schitzo weather is no help at all. I mean, do we really need any more rain in arkansas?