Sona

[pemphredouk]

Title:Sona
Author: pemphredouk
Pairing/Characters:OC and mentions of Michael, T Bag, Bellick and Mahone
Rating:G
Summary:The aftermath of the arrests in Panama, written for the challenge 'Five minutes after the end of S222 Sona
Spoilers:up to S222

Comments

[msgenevieve]

Ooooh! I know you were a bit worried about writing about Sona when we know nothing about it, but this is beautifully done. You've made me even more anxious for #301, if that's possible, lol!

[pemphredouk]

Hey thanks, and can I join the 'Nervous about Sona club' too please!

[msgenevieve]

*hands you a shiny badge*

[scribblecat]

Wow, this was so different from any fic I was expecting, all new characters and interesting look at the days events! So awesome to read this character within the 'show' bring up the glaring holes in the plot that we like to talk about! Hehe.

[pemphredouk]

There are plot holes in PB ??
blinks

I surprised myself by writing a fic that wasn't 98% Michael. but I was sooooo tempted to add a litte aside...

[scribblecat]

Your header is entrancing! I can not look away! Mmmmm

[pemphredouk]

Hey Thanks :o), but the credit must go to Tearcreek who did it for me!

[happywriter06]

I can see this happening. Makes a ot of sense. I hope what the writers come up with makes as much sense.

[pemphredouk]

God me too! I'm half megaexcited about S3 and half very very nervous.....

[torigates]

Wow! This was so original! It covered so much of the mystery and characters of the show we love, without even "seeing" them, so to speak. Great job, very well written and interesting :)

PS. I love your header.

[pemphredouk]

Thanks for the review and sometimes its interesting to write about the ripples that are created by the main characters rather than the guys themselves.
The header is yummy and I keep flicking back to the page during the day as well.. all credit goes to my beta reader Tearcreek who created it for me!

[anonymous]

Oh, dude, I thought this was going to be your next multi chapter story! Why not? You're so good at them. Somehow you always create that sort of movie-like realism and pacing and this is another exellent example of that. I'd really wish you continue this. The PB Hiatus is hard as it is and you could make it more bearable with continuing this fic! But it's your choice of course, but you can do it! You're talented!

[pemphredouk]

Wow I hadn;t thought of this as a mutli chapter fic, I'm having problems at the moment visualising Sona and Michael's times in there. Maybe a story will emerge at some point.

Thanks for the kind review.