Happy Galentine's Day

Feb 13, 2011 11:06

Not so relevant to this post, except that it's a story about a woman who is awesome: against my better judgment I got antsy and posted fic on a Saturday evening, even though we all know that's a bad time to do these things if you want anyone to see it. So in case you're interested and missed it, A Fairer House than Prose (or on DW) is my long- ( Read more... )

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rose_griffes February 13 2011, 22:31:08 UTC
Well, I already had fritatas at Chaila's party, so it's time for some desserts, right? :)

I could totally go for more Sarah Connor/James Ellison. Fic, pics, meta, whatever. OOOH, and please link me to your SCC fic, because I don't think I've read all of it since I hadn't watched the show yet when you were writing SCC fic...

Or anything else. Dessert is dessert is dessert, whether it's chocolate cream pie or banana nutbread.

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pellucid February 14 2011, 00:43:10 UTC
Gluten-free dessert! :) I will endeavor to write you some fic or meta or some such thing, but in the meantime, have the TSCC fic I've already written (all of it involving James and Sarah, shockingly). There's actually not as much as I feel like there should be; I should work on that.

My favorite TSCC fic--and the only "real" fic I've written for this show--is a bailar: post-series, Sarah and James and the dance that they do.

I also wrote Five Times James Ellison Didn't Feel Like a Father. And in what I believe has the distinction of being the first Sarah/Ellison fic ever (it's possible I'm wrong here, but I've certainly not seen any that preceded mine), a couple of porn battle snippets from January 2009: If You Want to Live and A Small Crime.

But I think I do have a really proper, multiple-drafts-with-the-beta fic about them in me; I just have to find my angle and write it.

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pellucid February 15 2011, 23:55:21 UTC
Once again, not exactly what you asked for, but there's definitely some James and Sarah in here ( ... )

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rose_griffes February 16 2011, 01:30:07 UTC
(Sorry about the deleted comment, I put it in the wrong spot the first time.)

Her memories of her biological mother are a little sharper but not altogether pleasant. (These, too, she can incorporate. "My mom isn't very good at showing affection, but she does try, in her own way.")

Eeep. I'm torn between laughter and a sadface, because that would be very true for a life with Sarah as a mother figure.

Sarah and James became Mom and Dad, and they all mostly lived in the car. They practiced names and stories every morning at breakfast.
Nice sharp detail here.

...her dad picked her up and said that it was all over, and they would be okay now. Her mom said, "it's never over."
Sneaky, putting this in Savannah's POV, so we don't know exactly what happened. Heh. Interesting way of presenting some kind of closure.

"Just be careful. You know we're never really safe."
Awwww... I'm amused that this line makes me feel all happy about their little permanently robot-bent family.

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pellucid February 16 2011, 03:09:59 UTC
Well, we all know that Sarah is actually not a particularly great mother, at least in the love-and-affirmation sense. :) (This, of course, is why I adore her, and anyway, Savannah has James!)

Mostly, I'm glad you enjoyed this! It's probably not the future I think might actually happen, but it is something I've thought about, in terms of the larger details, so I actually do know more or less what I think happened to stop Judgment Day (though Savannah, of course, doesn't really know--though perhaps at some point she will). But whether that whole story ever gets written remains to be seen. I don't exactly do long and plotty, after all.

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cofax7 February 16 2011, 05:58:42 UTC
Oh, cool! I really like this.

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pellucid February 16 2011, 15:26:19 UTC
I'm so glad! Thanks! :)

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beccatoria February 16 2011, 10:27:49 UTC
♥ ♥ ♥

OH ROBOT FIGHTING UNRELATED FAMILY. I'm...even a little sad she didn't get a brother. But mostly it's awesome the way Sarah is an awesome a sucky Mom and of course she's closer to James, and the way you show the early parts of her life bleeding together into a strange bedtime nightmare story. The way obviously Sarah is honestly and upfront with her about the threat even after it's "over" but Savannah's perspective itself never affirms or denies an adult belief in her childhood with killer robots.

In conclusion: ♥

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pellucid February 16 2011, 15:30:29 UTC
The family that fights robots together stays together? :) I'm delighted that you like it!

(And Savannah has a brother in her stories: his name was John, and he died in the car crash with their dad, when she was little, and this is why her mom is sad sometimes. But there won't be any new brothers or sisters, even though she wanted one for a while there, because that would make her mom even sadder.)

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"Just be careful. You know we're never really safe." ticketsonmyself February 17 2011, 01:54:32 UTC
I wanted to let you know I love this ficlet SO MUCH (maybe especially the dancing - I have a Sarah/James heart made of pudding!), and the little details, and I would totally read more of this storyverse. I would love to know what happened to stop Judgment Day! :D

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Re: "Just be careful. You know we're never really safe." pellucid February 17 2011, 03:49:06 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it, and if I ever manage to write something with plot, I suspect it just might be this. We'll see...

maybe especially the dancing - I have a Sarah/James heart made of pudding!

<3 Me too! I really cannot resist my desire to squish them together, in their slightly awkward, slightly snarky ambivalence toward each other. And for some reason, in my head they always dance.

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pellucid February 17 2011, 01:48:21 UTC
I'm glad you like my slightly random take on the robot-fighting family! I <3 them so much!

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fallingtowers February 19 2011, 08:00:15 UTC
Oh, that's awesome! Sarah's mantra of CONSTANT VIGILANCE and the way Savannah conflates her with her memories of robot!Catherine are two particularly effective strokes.

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pellucid February 22 2011, 17:14:42 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it!

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spankulert March 10 2011, 21:32:15 UTC
Oh, this was very awesome indeed. Loved the little details throughout <3

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