Comments | pedestrianized: one more thing

pedestrianized

one more thing

Jan 10, 2005 22:37

this is an english paper. it's pretty short and (hopefully) funny, too. if anyone feels like reading it and giving feedback, that would rock. but no pressure because yeah, homework=lots, etc.
( orwellian )

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pedestrianized January 10 2005, 19:43:15 UTC

note: there are like a million places where there should be italics here, but there aren't any, so...oops.

feycadenza January 10 2005, 20:11:41 UTC

that's funny, cuz my suggestion was going to be to add quotes or something...it is funny, tho, good job.

raphorick January 10 2005, 23:19:41 UTC

feel free to disregard this because its 2 am and i'm not very sure how good my reading comprehension skills are at this hour ( ... )

odovaucer January 12 2005, 19:11:43 UTC

6) You might possibly want consider contemplating a period of thinking about forming a focus group to decide if maybe a slightly less wishy-washy opening paragraph is a good idea. Right or wrong you should stick by your thesis ( ... )

pedestrianized January 12 2005, 20:03:54 UTC

well, thanks, but i already turned it in. i wonder if Howard will agree with you...