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Fic: For the Rain (3/4)

Nov 10, 2008 08:57

Title: For the Rain (3/4)
Author: peanutbutterer
Rating: PG13
Pairing: John/Elizabeth
Main characters: John, Elizabeth, Cameron, Sam, Jack
Genre: AU
Summary: Agent John Sheppard is about to get a new partner - a woman he never thought he’d see again.
A/N: Special thanks to IR for her cheerleading (and putting up with me throughout this process, omg) and to ed_84 for ( Read more... )

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momm2five November 10 2008, 18:10:13 UTC

oooohhh . . . the intrigue . . . lol!

I can't wait to find out more about their past.

Love it!

peanutbutterer November 10 2008, 22:10:24 UTC

Ha! Your icon is awesome.

More to come!

the_scary_kitty November 10 2008, 19:34:31 UTC

Whoohoo! Sparky!spies! The cloak-and-dagger stuff was great fun... damn, now I've got a hankering to watch some Alias. ;)

And that last scene between John and Elizabeth. Oh, my. Can't wait to see how that gets resolved!

peanutbutterer November 10 2008, 22:17:17 UTC

Watching of Alias is always encouraged.

Glad you're enjoying. =)

odakota_rose November 10 2008, 19:56:48 UTC

Ooh, finally more details. The curiosity was beginning to lead me towards wild speculation ;D
On the other hand, I'm starting to think words cannot convey how much I'm starting to like this AU..

peanutbutterer November 10 2008, 22:18:05 UTC

Wild speculation is the best kind! *g*

Thank you!

vickysg1 November 10 2008, 20:54:01 UTC

Great chapter! I wonder what's really happening.

I love you Carson, but you have the worst timing ever!

peanutbutterer November 10 2008, 22:20:06 UTC

All will be resolved soon. ;)

ed_84 November 10 2008, 21:38:30 UTC

Hahaha. First, I thought NCIS, but oh no. This is so Alias - on funny crack. All the gadgets and swift missions - you never know what's going to happen next! The snark here is flawless, and I can't even quote the lines because there are just so many of them. John using the make-out ruse to get away from guards? Ha. "Don't slap me." ;)

But this?

“So,” Cameron said, breaking the awkward silence that followed that revelation, “instead of bringing down the bad guy we actually released the bad guy - does that mean the barbeque is off?”

“Is Sheppard’s birthday still tomorrow?” O’Neill asked.

“I’d assume so, sir.”

“The cake has already been purchased?”

“Yes, sir.”

“Then the barbeque is still on. We’ll have as many agents as possible attempting to locate Kenmore. When we spot him, we move.”

SO JACK. ;)

peanutbutterer November 10 2008, 22:23:50 UTC

How did you know about the funny crack! IR TOLD, DIDN'T SHE? That rat.

Jack just knows there's no reason to waste perfectly good cake!