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HMD?
Jan 09, 2011 02:16
So what do you think? Too serious? Too derpy? Let me know here! ♥
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legit crit all up IN yo hmd
raincoats
May 29 2011, 09:00:08 UTC
okay bear with me mite b gettin a little teel dear up in here but lemme say what needs to be said
SRS CONCRIT
PART ONE
THE PERSONALITY
THE PERSONA
THE FACADE
THE SEA OF OUR SOULS GIVES US A
SUZAKU
okay first let's talk canon point
you're playing this dude when he's a jerk so that's obv a factor
i've noticed you've been getting kinda buddy buddy lately and that is just not acceptable okay
this is splendor remember
this is war
so go punch lelouch in the face or something with
this look in your eye
EYE OF THE TIGER
in fact why isn't this your default icon yet anyway
alright now lemme break it down
THIS IS THE ONLY CR YOU ARE ALLOWED TO HAVE
unless you wanna like
go here
THIS IS ACCEPTABLE TOO
wait who is my character GOD YKNOW WAHT JUST NO
OKAY PERFECT
moving on
WHERE THE FUCK IS ARTHUR
OKAY I'M APPING HIM NEXT ROUND
JUST FOR THE GUN BITING
code persona. it's gonna be a thing.
next
itt you need to crank dat fabulous factor up a notch i mean
look at this competition
LASTLY IN CONCLUSATORY DECISIVENESS
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SRS CONCRIT
PART ONE
THE PERSONALITY
THE PERSONA
THE FACADE
THE SEA OF OUR SOULS GIVES US A SUZAKU
okay first let's talk canon point
you're playing this dude when he's a jerk so that's obv a factor
i've noticed you've been getting kinda buddy buddy lately and that is just not acceptable okay
this is splendor remember
this is war
so go punch lelouch in the face or something with
this look in your eye
EYE OF THE TIGER
in fact why isn't this your default icon yet anyway
alright now lemme break it down
THIS IS THE ONLY CR YOU ARE ALLOWED TO HAVE
unless you wanna like
go here
THIS IS ACCEPTABLE TOO
wait who is my character GOD YKNOW WAHT JUST NO
OKAY PERFECT
moving on
WHERE THE FUCK IS ARTHUR
OKAY I'M APPING HIM NEXT ROUND
JUST FOR THE GUN BITING
code persona. it's gonna be a thing.
next
itt you need to crank dat fabulous factor up a notch i mean
look at this competition
LASTLY IN CONCLUSATORY DECISIVENESS
tag faster
Reply
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