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Jan 09, 2011 02:16

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legit crit all up IN yo hmd raincoats May 29 2011, 09:00:08 UTC
okay bear with me mite b gettin a little teel dear up in here but lemme say what needs to be said

SRS CONCRIT

PART ONE

THE PERSONALITY

THE PERSONA

THE FACADE

THE SEA OF OUR SOULS GIVES US A SUZAKU

okay first let's talk canon point

you're playing this dude when he's a jerk so that's obv a factor

i've noticed you've been getting kinda buddy buddy lately and that is just not acceptable okay

this is splendor remember



this is war

so go punch lelouch in the face or something with
this look in your eye

EYE OF THE TIGER

in fact why isn't this your default icon yet anyway

alright now lemme break it down



THIS IS THE ONLY CR YOU ARE ALLOWED TO HAVE

unless you wanna like

go here



THIS IS ACCEPTABLE TOO

wait who is my character GOD YKNOW WAHT JUST NO





OKAY PERFECT

moving on

WHERE THE FUCK IS ARTHUR

OKAY I'M APPING HIM NEXT ROUND

JUST FOR THE GUN BITING

code persona. it's gonna be a thing.

next

itt you need to crank dat fabulous factor up a notch i mean



look at this competition

LASTLY IN CONCLUSATORY DECISIVENESS

tag faster

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