the cicadas are making me deaf

[peaceful_word]

my chest begins to hurt

because I'm unable to breathe

deprived of oxygen,

crying I gasped

and closed my eyes

Comments

Yo, Retard

[pinebox]

Here is what I think of your poetry:

Re: Yo, Retard

[_nightworlder_]

What really annoys me are those people who don't give a reason for what they do or even say. So i guess you're one of them.

Re: Yo, Retard

[kiana]

You actually have a better chance of being suspended from lj than this journal, just so you know. =)

Re: Yo, Retard

[pinebox]

Pinebox, you are disgusting.

For fuck's sake, just ignore the person.

Re: Yo, Retard

[onlywaymyheart]

You. Are. Sick.

Some people on livejournal are minors including myself and that wasn't appropriate to put since my younger sister was with me when I was reading this. And cynister is right that you have more chances of the suspension. I actually learned how to ignore it.