[Fic] Waltz for the Moon

[pea_blossom]

Title: Waltz for the Moon
Author: queen_kat_tun 
Beta: kaykm 
Genre: Fluff/Romance?
Rating: Safe
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters mentioned in this fanfiction.

Prompt: FFVIII inspired. Akame’s characters should be based on the characters from the game Final Fantasy VIII created by Squaresoft.

A/N: If you do not have any background from the

Comments

[karilly]

Queen-chan I LOVE IT!!!!! It was perfect!! And I LOVE YOU for writing this ♥ Oh, even if you hadn’t asked, I’d had given you a concrit…though I don’t have criticism. Only LOVE :P

When you told me you’d reproduce a scene I had this one in my mind. I thought it had been great if you focus on this one. And then when I saw the title I got all excited. I was in class and smiling like a baka. Because of you everyone look at me strangely *pouts* But then, I couldn’t read it and I’m telling you, it was the longest class I’ve ever had and the longest way home too. I wanted to read it so badly, wondering how you related it to Akame. And I’m soooo satisfied. Well, more than that, I’m sooo happy you’ve written this. And I’m so glad I requested something about FFVIII. I knew you’d be the best to do it. Thank you!

I love how you associated Squall’s personality to Jin. Brooding~ XD But I liked how he smiled when with Pi and Ryo but the moment the two guys wouldn’t be here, his smile would fade away. I like this character. You can see that he isn’t very sociable. And it was funny also. "Your ringlets are cute, Akanishi-san." <= that cracked me up for some reasons XD Kazuya’s persistence was cute. But really, I just loved this Kazuya <3 I can imagine him smiling warmly at Jin with his half-pony. No wonder Jin couldn’t resist in the end and got lost in the moment while dancing.

Talking about the dance… I really want to see them dancing for real *pouts* So when are you dethroning Johnny and becoming JE’s boss so you can make Akame reproduce this scene??? XP But seriously you describe it very well and you managed to keep the magic of the original scene of the game. Then the magic disappeared with the end of the waltz but Kazuya’s words and kiss were loved!!! Wasn’t expecting this but I totally loved it. Thanks for making it so fluffy :P I’m having no doubt that Jin will find him! I think you ended it perfectly that way too.

You really made it original not only getting inspired from the scene but making used of different things of the games. Like the 3 men playing cards next to the elevator hehe XD I think it’s great because even readers who haven’t played FFVIII (shame on them!!!) can totally read it and enjoyed it. But then for the ones who knows about it, it makes it more magical.

I hope from my words you understand how much I loved it because I’m not sure I was able to express it. I’d always wanted to have a fic written in relation to FFVIII and the truth is that I had high expectations since it’s my favorite RPG. But you totally meet them and even more….I really love you for writing this. ♥♥♥ It’s totally worth the bullying :P Thank you Queen-chan! Like really! You made me happy with this &hearts I’m going to read it again for sure…lot of time. Looking forward for your other drabbles *hug*

[queen_kat_tun]

Long comments that are full of love are always awesome! XD

I actually wanted to write the one where Rinoa was in a state of coma (you know the scene, right?) but then I went,"No. Kari is a cheerful lady. Angst wouldn't suit her smiles and laughter." and then this scene came to mind. It was perfect because it has that certain amount of hesitance and gentleness on Squall's part and Rinoa was subtly teasing and persistent. Somehow, I found those attributes to blend well with Jin's and Kame's. All in all, I think that that scene would be to your liking. :) and I'm really happy to know that I did not fail you :D

I agree about having high expectations about this because I do think that FFVIII deserves only the best and is already perfect as is. It really made me happy to know that I have met your standards :) Like what I have told Cora, I had my doubts on this, but all is well, I think. :)

Thank you for the review and all the giddiness. :D &hearts

P.S. I told you that we should get married. I make you happy even if I bully you to my heart's content XDD

love, love &hearts

[karilly]

Glad to read that :P

Really I'm happy you chose this scene in the end. I'm indeed not very good with angst. But then remember I read one of your angst and it was really well writen. Those the kind of angst I can take, when it's beautiful. So yes, I'm saying this because I wouldn't mind you writing about this scene either :P There are actually lot of interesting scenes in FFVIII like when they are alone on Ragnorak. I also love when Rinoa asked Zell to make a copy of Squall Leonhart ring...Well, I just love Rinoa and Squall. They're such a cute couple~

FFVIII deserves only the best indeed. For me it's the best game, with the best couple and the best music too. It's one of the few that I was satisfied with the end (though I'd never say no to more Rinoa/Squall love haha) How I woish they'd make a movie or TV adaptation or anything like this *sigh* But yes, you didn't fail me at all. It was perfect how you wrote it and you also made it very original as requested! &hearts

Hmmm...I'll think about your proposal then. What about seducing me with something like a FFVIII *cough*series*cough* Yup you might like to bully me but never forget that if you still want to marry me, you'd have a very demanding spouse~ XP

So now I saw very interesting things on my f-list so I'm running over there hehe *waves* ♥