Re: Good Thing That Never Happened!robotapocalypseOctober 22 2005, 17:05:30 UTC
I don't understand what you're doing with the sentence fragment. An "explanation" that dances around specifics is not an explanation at all. Isn't the first rule of informed writing the emphasis on the "informed" part? Do we accept generalizations and unsupported claims from our students?
Syracuse University Chancellor Nancy Cantor disbanded the student-run television station HillTV on Thursday.
Cantor spoke to former HillTV General Manager Rich Levy, the department heads and the former sports director at 4:30 p.m. to tell them of her decision to disable the station. Cantor also told the HillTV representatives of the administration's decision to create a new student-run television network on campus.
The HillTV Web site, HillTV.com, was removed Thursday evening.
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The physical presence of equipment and the promise of a TV station yet to come does not consititute a TV station. That "the former HillTV studio, located in Watson Hall, will still be open for student production use" does not constitute a TV station. Only an actively broadcasting body of content constitutes a TV station.
There is no TV station.
Syracuse University Chancellor Nancy Cantor disbanded the student-run television station HillTV on Thursday.
Cantor spoke to former HillTV General Manager Rich Levy, the department heads and the former sports director at 4:30 p.m. to tell them of her decision to disable the station. Cantor also told the HillTV representatives of the administration's decision to create a new student-run television network on campus.
The HillTV Web site, HillTV.com, was removed Thursday evening.
[. . .]
The physical presence of equipment and the promise of a TV station yet to come does not consititute a TV station. That "the former HillTV studio, located in Watson Hall, will still be open for student production use" does not constitute a TV station. Only an actively broadcasting body of content constitutes a TV station.
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