Ooh! kimonkey7 has been talking this up to me. Very excited to have a look! Um. Yes. Will comment again once I've actually, like, READ the chapter. Sheesh.
Well, holy crap. That was intense and painful and beautiful and angstorific and terrible, and I'm utterly hooked. Nice job.
And, damn, it's good to have Meg back. I love Meg. You know, in that way that's actually hating her with great hatred. I mean, I know the demon's still potentially around, but I miss MEG, and I love that she chose to come back to/for Dean in that form. It's so fucked up in so many ways. Which I sense could be a theme here.
Oh, hello you. You know what I love? I love that you announce your intention to read my fic. You is like: Oh, you has a chapter. I is going to read it, k? This is the essence of great communication. Like indicating in your car before you make a turn. *approves*
It's so fucked up in so many ways. Which I sense could be a theme here.
Certainly this is correct from a grammatical perspective. (ETA: I has had to EDIT this comment. TWICE. See?) Just ask the betas. And yeah, bring the Meg back, I say.
*has clearly grown tired of waiting for this to happen*
TGIF (my time) just took on a whole new meaning! It's not like I didn't know it was going to be amazing. So intense and visceral I have to keep checking to make sure I'm not bleeding myself. I can feel Dean's agony and rage and the tightness in Sam's and Bobby's chests when they look at what she did to him. The movement back in forth in time between during and after was extremely effective and all the things you didn't detail simply ratcheted up the intensity--after all, what you have to imagine is often so much worse than what somebody just hands you. I love the economy of your writing, the way it gives my imagination breathing room.
Once a week, huh? Seriously? Let's see, what have I got that might work as a bribe for the Dragons? A cave full of glittering treasure? Jensen Ackles delivered to your door in nothing but a bow? (Yeah, if I could manage that, he'd be delivered to my own door!) Okay, okay, I'll cope.
[Teeny little editorial note about something that snuck by: No. Some girl, walked passed a second ago.
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'bella! Hey. *chuckles* You has been very patient. Quit dancing around. You is making a fool of yourself.
And yeah. Once a week. Just until I finish her. Then I'll pick up the posting pace. But I is needing to make sure I don't catch up to myself and have a nervous breakdown. That, I is not needing.
Editorial note? Thank you kindly. Ooops.
Thanks for reading. Glad you weren't disappointed after all that waiting. :-)
See icon.....me.....until next post.....please.....
I just got the Supernatural magazine that I paid for like six months ago and they were talking about what a great guest star the Meg actress was (plus I'm partial to her haircut). I agree, I loved that whole section from the Scarecrow on..
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*is lame at 7:30 a.m.*
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And, damn, it's good to have Meg back. I love Meg. You know, in that way that's actually hating her with great hatred. I mean, I know the demon's still potentially around, but I miss MEG, and I love that she chose to come back to/for Dean in that form. It's so fucked up in so many ways. Which I sense could be a theme here.
:-) Excellent start. Full steam ahead, please!
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It's so fucked up in so many ways. Which I sense could be a theme here.
Certainly this is correct from a grammatical perspective. (ETA: I has had to EDIT this comment. TWICE. See?) Just ask the betas. And yeah, bring the Meg back, I say.
*has clearly grown tired of waiting for this to happen*
Thanks for reading.
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Once a week, huh? Seriously? Let's see, what have I got that might work as a bribe for the Dragons? A cave full of glittering treasure? Jensen Ackles delivered to your door in nothing but a bow? (Yeah, if I could manage that, he'd be delivered to my own door!) Okay, okay, I'll cope.
[Teeny little editorial note about something that snuck by: No. Some girl, walked passed a second ago. ( ... )
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And yeah. Once a week. Just until I finish her. Then I'll pick up the posting pace. But I is needing to make sure I don't catch up to myself and have a nervous breakdown. That, I is not needing.
Editorial note? Thank you kindly. Ooops.
Thanks for reading. Glad you weren't disappointed after all that waiting. :-)
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Shall look out for more, thank you :-)
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Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading. :-)
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I just got the Supernatural magazine that I paid for like six months ago and they were talking about what a great guest star the Meg actress was (plus I'm partial to her haircut). I agree, I loved that whole section from the Scarecrow on..
So yeah, this killed me in the best possible way.
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*claps hand over mouth* I mean, um, whoops. Sorry. *puts down knife*
Thanks for reading, dude. Superglad you enjoyed it.
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