Comments | pbfic_exchange2: "Healing Waters", for poisonshades

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"Healing Waters", for poisonshades

Jan 19, 2009 19:38

Title: Healing Waters
Author: To be revealed
Rating: PG-13
Category: Darkfic, Angst
Characters: Michael/Sara
Requested by: chicago21
Summary: Takes place after “Greatness Achieved” during Season 4. The crew finalizes details on another mission to rescue Scylla, Sara remembers her time and torture in Panama at the hands of the Company and leans on Michael ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

anonymous January 19 2009, 12:17:20 UTC

Very very good! I truly enjoyed this, i really wanted to see a scene like this on the canon but knew there was no space for it, so thank you for writing a fic about it. I liked the details of Sara's captivity, the guard who liked to scare her with pretending to kill LJ - very powerful and very Company.

Two moments I truly loved -

“I knew you were alive. You had to be. Otherwise they would have killed me. So every day I was alive meant you were alive.”

“We’re both here to fight them, Sara.” He stroked her neck, his thumb over her collarbone. “But when we’re done, I’m here for you and only you.”

Great job!

anonymous January 19 2009, 21:41:45 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it! :) Sara's captivity was so important to her character development and we didn't see nearly enough of it on the show.

Thanks. :)

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anonymous January 19 2009, 21:45:43 UTC

Oh yay! So excited you enjoyed it!! Michael and Sara are so complex so writing them is so fun. Thank you for the great prompt!

And I'm relieved you liked the title. Ha. I had it titled something else for a long time but it didn't end up fitting, so I had to make a quick decision. So glad you thought it worked.

So glad you enjoyed it!! :)

danni18 January 19 2009, 14:25:47 UTC

I’m here for you and only you.”

LOved this line, it should be what he tells her. Anyway, loved how you wrote about what happened to sara, so think the viewers deserved to see more of taht in the show. You relaly kept them in character and I could feel sara's pain as well as resolve.

danni18 January 19 2009, 21:47:54 UTC

Thank you! I liked that line as well. Once they take down the Company, Sara and Michael are going to have to reasons to be together and I feel like they could really help each other heal.

Thanks for your fb. :)

anonymous January 19 2009, 14:37:01 UTC

Oh, this was SO good!!

It's now my new 'canon' for that missing bit of what happened to Sara. I love the theme of water, too! And you explain why she can't let Michael take the blame very well!

anonymous January 19 2009, 21:49:10 UTC

Thanks! :) There is so much missing canon for Sara and I love writing about it. Thanks for fb. :)

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anonymous January 19 2009, 21:50:57 UTC

Wow, thank so much!! Got a big grin reading your fb. Thanks so much!!