Title: Latency
Author: To be revealed
Rating: pg-13
Category: Drama, Angst, Implied Het, set around 4:16 (no spoilers)
Characters/Pairings: Michael, Christina, Lincoln, Sara, some Sara/Michael
Requested by:
foxriverinmate.
Summary: Michael cannot decide what is real and what is the figment of his post-operative condition, but his mind is about to be challenged
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So for now...WOW!!!
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Michael/Wentworth does that to a person.
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Glad you enjoyed it : )
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I was enthralled and couldn't stop reading. Great job!
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The wondeful imaginary world of Michael's inner self was beautifully and extremely vividly written.
Loved every part about it, from beggining to the end. Very true to the characters also.
The part that compared Linc to Aldo and Michael to Christina was the cherry on top, for it's a fact that hasn't been breached much yet, but plays a huge part in the way the characters behave on CANON.
Again, brilliant work! Very impressed!
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Very pleased you liked it; thanks for saying it so wonderfully.
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The imagery, like the use of military hardware and strategies, really expresses the battlefield that is Michael's brain when he's indulging in self-flagellation for his real or perceived guilt. That is a touch of genius!
I love that he would also balance out the Family and the Voice of Reasonwith Gretchen and T-Bag representing The Badness. Michael would never allow himself to take a one-sided view of his actions, would he?
‘She’s using you like she used Dad,’ Michael said... ‘It’s the same. She’s the thinker - don’t you get it? And Aldo was the standover man….now she’s grooming a standover son…’
We've not seen what's going to happen with the brothers and their mother in the show yet but I so want it to be like this! Even before we've got to know Christina and her motives concerning her sons, I find my self disliking her and you've captured this feeling beautifully here.
His mother’s weapon is ( ... )
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I wanted something a little different for you and a bit left of center. I know you enjoy Michael anyway, so the exploration of his mind appealed a lot.
Your prompt was easy to work with, and nothing you've said is rambling. It was a pleasure to write it for you
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