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"Conquistador," 3/3 for linc_mike_jess

Mar 16, 2007 09:33

Title : Conquistador 3/3
Rating : NC-17 (sexual situations)
Characters : Michael, Sara, Lincoln, original characters
Pairing : Michael/Sara
Genre : Angst, Drama, AU, Post-exoneration.
Summary : I’m not here because I love you. I’m here because of my fundamental inability to be happy.
Thanks : to my wonderful beta-reader.
Requested by : linc_mike_jessNote : ( Read more... )

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guinevere79 March 18 2007, 06:03:46 UTC

Whoa. I'm a solid Michael-Sara shipper and I absolutely loved this. I've been looking for a long time for the best dark, angsty Michael characterization (to complement the best dark, angsty Sara in Antoine Baros' Mad About You)....and this story is it. Your description of Michael's troubled psyche is so vivid it's almost frightening.

Of course, I hope to god that this doesn't happen on the show ever, but it was a very very good read. Well done.

guinevere79 March 18 2007, 11:40:18 UTC

I've been looking for a long time for the best dark, angsty Michael characterization
Oh yeah, that was certainly meant to be dark. It's far from the usual feel-good Michael/Sara story! But I enjoy dark, too, I don't know why. I'm glad it satisfied your need for darkness.

Your description of Michael's troubled psyche is so vivid it's almost frightening.
Really? Cool!!!

Of course, I hope to god that this doesn't happen on the show ever.
Me neither. Please, let them be happy and have thousands of babies!

Thanks for the great review.

taxidryer March 21 2007, 02:52:10 UTC

...to complement the best dark, angsty Sara in Antoine Baros' Mad About You.
Hey, thanks for the compliment!
But I have to admit I didn't really like Conquistador. I like the MiSa interactions but I think the two first chapters were boring and unnecessary. But that's just my opinion! (I hope the author won't read this...)

guinevere79 March 21 2007, 12:53:55 UTC

It's okay. I expected some people to find it too long.

taxidryer March 21 2007, 23:07:50 UTC

JUST KIDDING! You were right, I wrote it! Good guess. :-)

guinevere79 March 22 2007, 01:26:41 UTC

I really don't know what clues gave you away as the writer, maybe it was the whole mood of the fic. Anyway, I love this. Wonderfully written, and scary sometimes :)

taxidryer March 22 2007, 04:00:53 UTC

Thank you for your support! My ego is now oversized because of you! ;-)

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