Of Diplomacy 1/?

[payroo]

Title: Of Diplomacy
Chapter: 1/?
Rating: T
Characters: Cyrion Tabris, Adaia, and random alienage elves
Spoilers: None for game events.
Summary: Cyrion Tabris awaits his bride from Amaranthine. Adaia seethes and broods.

Chapter 2

Comments

[baroque_tragedy]

Wow. I love the characterizations: calm, optimistic Cyrion and the angry, passionate Adaia. Am really fascinated by the way you've written Adaia; she seems like a firebrand (to put it lightly), and I'm curious as to where you are taking her character.

Very well-written, am really looking forward to more. ♥♥♥

Also, I...looked in the toolset for you and couldn't find a canonical last name for Adaia. I don't know if there is one.

[payroo]

Wow, that was a fast response! Thanks so much! I'm having a lot of fun with this so far.

And thanks for looking in the toolset! Ah well, come to think of it, I vaguely remember reading somewhere that most Fereldans don't have last names (think medieval, I suppose). I guess she can just be Adaia.

[bamftastik]

Oh fabulous! And what a lovely sidestory to explore. I could totally see your Adaia being my Tabris' mum ;D

[payroo]

Many thanks! XD
I cannot resist the Tabris origin; it has way too much drama!potential.
And believe me, it is a very high compliment to hear that my Adaia could mother your kickass Tabris!

[silksieve]

Parental backstory FTW! :D This is absolutely terrific, and I'm all --what's going to happen next?! XD

[payroo]

Thanks! Ha, I'm usually terrible about continuing and finishing longer fics, but we'll see where this goes!